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Dear sir, Nice to meet you. I am a student at ABC High School Recently i have a problem about remember important fact. M1y friend was introduced your course for me to improving memory. I am a student growing up, upcoming i will have a nation college extrance exam so i need your course to solve my memory help me can improve to prepare this exam. I was found a way to improved my memory but it difficult to me. Sometime i have an important information but i can't remind this, then i was passed many importan information. Now, i still find rather way and i find to your course. I am not sure i can't do better before but i hope your course can help me. It will be fine if u give me some more details ìnormation about methods that use on the course. Now i have a many free time so u can show the time i can go here. I think your course can help me and i will look forward to your reply.
Dear sir,

Nice to
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meet
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have a problem about remember
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important
fact. M1y friend
was introduced
your
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course
for me to improving memory. I am a student growing up, upcoming
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i
will have a nation college
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extrance
exam
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so
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i
need your
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course
to solve my memory
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help
me can
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improve
to prepare this exam. I
was found
a way to
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improved
my memory
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but
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it
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difficult to me
. Sometime
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i
have an
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important
information
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but
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i
can't remind this, then
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i
was passed
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many
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importan
information.
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,
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still
find
rather
way and
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find to your
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course
. I am not sure
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i
can't do better
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before
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hope your
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course
can
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some
more
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details
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ìnormation
about methods that
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use
on the
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course
.
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Now
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i
have a
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many
free time
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so
u can
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show
the time
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i
can go here. I
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think
your
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course
can
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help
me and
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i
will look forward to your reply.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
178 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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