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Your friends love doing sports and you want to spend a weekend together with them. Write a letter in which you describe a place you would recommend for a weekend.

Your friends love doing sports and you want to spend a weekend together with them. Write a letter in which you describe a place you would recommend for a weekend. 1A7Gn

Dear Sabina, How is it going? I hope this letter will find you in high spirits. I'm writing you because I have a brilliant idea. No doubt, you'll like my concept. I want to sugesst you to spend time together in the mountains. We can kill two birds with one stone. We can relax and do sports together. Besides, I haven't seen you for ages. I know one wonderful place in the Carpathians. Last year I was there with my classmates who told me about this place. This is a village Rozluch that stands at the foot of the Carpathians. It is remarkably beautiful. The air and water are much cleaner there. Rozluch is one of the most attractive resorts of the Ukrainian Carpathians. Its cascades of mountains and fresh air fascinate spirit. And its picturesque view is pleasing to the eye. We can do different thins there. First, we will go up on foot to the mountains. There are several sources with mineral water. You definitely must try it. That's why we climb to one of them. And, of course, it is a perfect place for skiing and sledging. In addition, there is a rink and we can skate. As for me, this place excellent suit for sport lovers. Certainly, it is a marvelous place to be. However, it is all neccesary to see with your own eyes. Let's make our weekends unforgettable. I hope you like my suggestion. I'm sure you'll fancy this place. Please, write me as soon as possible and let me know what you'll have decided. Lots of love, Tori

Dear Sabina,

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because
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idea
. No doubt, you'll like my concept. I want to Possible spelling mistake found.suggestssuggestsuresthugestSOGESTsagest
sugesst
 you to spend time together in the mountains. We can kill two birds with one stone. We can relax and do sports together. Besides
, I haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you for ages.

I know one wonderful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 in the Carpathians. Last year I was there with my classmates who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me about this place.

This is a village Possible spelling mistake found.RoughTouchCouchPouchRoachCrouch
Rozluch
 that stands at the foot of the Carpathians. It is remarkably
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
. The air and water are much cleaner there. Possible spelling mistake found.RoughTouchCouchPouchRoachCrouch
Rozluch
 is one of the most attractive resorts of the Ukrainian Carpathians.

Its cascades of mountains and fresh air fascinate spirit. And its picturesque view The verb 'pleasing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is pleasing
 to the eye.

We can do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 thins there. First
, we will go up on foot to the mountains. There are several sources with mineral water. You definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 try it. That's why we climb to one of them. And, of course
, it is a perfect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 for skiing and sledging. In addition
, there is a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).rink, and
rink and
 we can skate.

As for me, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 excellent suit for sport lovers. Certainly
, it is a marvelous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 to be. However
, it is all Possible spelling mistake found.necessary
neccesary
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 eyes.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our weekends unforgettable. I hope you like my suggestion. I'm sure you'll fancy this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, write me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know what you'll have decided.

Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

Tori