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Write a letter to your previous English teacher because you can't go to his/her invitation.

Write a letter to your previous English teacher because you can't go to his/her invitation. RRK9k
Dear Sir, Thank you so much for inviting me to a dinner at your home this Thursday. Unfortunately, I would not be able to make it because I am leaving for Australia on Thursday morning. You have not just been my English teacher but also my friend, philosopher and guide throughout my school days. It was you who motivated me to go abroad for my higher studies and it was because of your guidance that I cleared my IELTS with such good bands that I got into one of the best colleges of Australia. It is also very kind of you to invite me for dinner and it is my loss that I cannot come. Actually, my ticket has been already booked. My flight is leaving on Thursday night and I have to leave from here for Delhi that morning. Sir, I take this opportunity to thank you once again for all you have done for me and I shall keep in touch with you after going there through e-mail. My e-mail ID is pooria. soleimany93@gmail. com. Yours faithfully, Pooria Soleimani
Dear Sir,

Thank you
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so
much for inviting me
When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "to dinner".
to a dinner
at your home this Thursday. Unfortunately, I would not be able to
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make
it
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because
I am leaving for Australia on Thursday morning. You have not
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just
been my English teacher
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but
also
my friend, philosopher and guide throughout my school days. It was you who motivated me to go abroad for my higher studies and it was
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because
of your guidance that I cleared my IELTS with such
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
bands that I
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got
into one of the best colleges of Australia. It is
also
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very
kind of you to invite me for dinner and it is my loss that I cannot
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come
. Actually, my ticket has been already booked. My flight is leaving on Thursday night and I
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have to
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leave
from here for Delhi that morning. Sir, I take this opportunity to thank you once again for all you have done for me and I shall
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keep
in touch with you after going there through e-mail. My e-mail ID is
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pooria
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soleimany93@gmail
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com
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Yours
faithfully
,

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Pooria
Soleimani

IELTS letter Write a letter to your previous English teacher because you can't go to his/her invitation.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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