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You are going to arrange a party invite your friend, reason for party, tell your plan, why you want to invite your friend

You are going to arrange a party invite your friend, reason for party, tell your plan, why you want to invite your friend 0Egql
Dear John, Hope you are enjoying pink days of your life, it is a long time we have not met nevertheless, on 21st January is"25th wedding anniversary" of my beloved parents, so I am inviting and telling you in advance so be ready this is going to be a golden time. Let me explain it to you, "Murree palace" is a new resort where we are going to celebrate. My cousins Harris has arrange every thing, my elder brother Hassan has booked it, you know he is a keen to explore new places. As for as my duties concern I have decided to lit the fire and will sit around and sing songs, I have also some games like musical chair, pass the parcel and read and perform. We have also arranged barbeque party, so this going to be very memorable time. The reason to invite you is that you are engine of my life, your are my sole partner, you are always on my back in any situation. So, how can I forget you, moreover, you will have a chance for face to face meeting with my family, we will make our time precious. Hope for a quick and prompt reply from you. Keep in mind no excuse will be eccepted. Best regards, Sam Hassan.
Dear John,

Hope you are enjoying pink days of your life, it is a long time we have not met
nevertheless
, on 21st January is
"
25th wedding anniversary
"
of my beloved parents,
so
I am inviting and telling you in advance
so
be ready this is going to be a golden time.

Let
me
explain
it to you,
"
Murree
palace
"
is a new resort where we are going to celebrate. My cousins Harris has
arrange
every thing, my elder brother Hassan has booked it, you know he is a keen to explore new places. As for as my duties concern I have decided
to lit
the fire and will sit around and sing songs, I have
also
some
games like musical chair, pass the parcel and read and perform. We have
also
arranged
barbeque
party,
so
this going to be
very
memorable time.

The reason to invite you is that you are engine of my life, your are my sole partner, you are always on my back in any situation.
So
, how can I forget you,
moreover
, you will have a chance for face to face meeting with my family, we will
make
our time precious.

Hope for a quick and prompt reply from you.
Keep
in mind no excuse will be
eccepted
.

Best regards, Sam Hassan.
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IELTS letter You are going to arrange a party invite your friend, reason for party, tell your plan, why you want to invite your friend

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  American English
6 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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