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We, The AON Inspection and Trading Service Co. Ltd thank you very much for your interest in our inspection services, We would take this opportunity to introduce ourselves as a competent & professional inspection services in following scope of works: - Marine survey - Import- export cargo survey - Petroleum and chemical products survey - Property & technical survey - Risk Assessment Having surveyed thousands of cases, AONSER has learnt so much experience in: - Protecting our clients’ right interests as well as dealing with the opponents; and surveying, investigating the nature causes and extent of damage to almost types of properties, machinery & equipment, cargo, containers, vessels, wharf, jetty, port equipment’s, etc. Establishing quantum and applying policy condition; and Recommending, offering, applying measures of loss / damage prevention, mitigation; and Corresponding, communicating, negotiating on behalf of clients, etc. AONSER has been earning with a high reputation, conf

We, The AON Inspection and Trading Service Co. Ltd thank you very much for your interest in our inspection services, We would take this opportunity to introduce ourselves as a competent & professional inspection services in following scope of works: - Marine survey - Import- export cargo survey - Petroleum and chemical products survey - Property & technical survey - Risk Assessment Having surveyed thousands of cases, AONSER has learnt so much experience in: - Protecting our clients’ right interests as well as dealing with the opponents; and surveying, investigating the nature causes and extent of damage to almost types of properties, machinery & equipment, cargo, containers, vessels, wharf, jetty, port equipment’s, etc. Establishing quantum and applying policy condition; and Recommending, offering, applying measures of loss / damage prevention, mitigation; and Corresponding, communicating, negotiating on behalf of clients, etc. AONSER has been earning with a high reputation, conf G9yVg
We, The AON Inspection and Trading Service Co. Ltd thank you very much for your interest in our inspection services, We would take this opportunity to introduce ourselves as a competent & professional inspection services in following scope of works: - Marine survey - Import- export cargo survey - Petroleum and chemical products survey - Property & technical survey - Risk Assessment Having surveyed thousands of cases, AONSER has learnt so much experience in: - Protecting our clients’ right interests as well as dealing with the opponents; and surveying, investigating the nature causes and extent of damage to almost types of properties, machinery & equipment, cargo, containers, vessels, wharf, jetty, port equipment’s, etc. Establishing quantum and applying policy condition; and Recommending, offering, applying measures of loss / damage prevention, mitigation; and Corresponding, communicating, negotiating on behalf of clients, etc. AONSER has been earning with a high reputation, confidence, supports from our sincere clients and become leading surveyor in domestic and oversea. We are executing survey services on behalf of the well-known insurers / underwriters, agents, brokers, P&I clubs, namely Petrolimex Insurance Corp. (PJICO), Post and Telecommunication Joint Stock Insurance Corp. (PTI), Bao Minh Insurance Corp, Bao Viet Insurance Co. , Military Insurance Corp. (MIC), Bank for Investment & Development of Vietnam Insurance Corp. (BIC), Petro Vietnam Insurance Company (PVI), West of England, UK P&I, North of England, Gard P&I, Skuld P&I, China P&I, etc…. We would attach herewith our company profile and tariff for your further reference and considering of using our survey services. Please feel free to contact us if you need further information.
We, The AON Inspection and Trading
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Co. Ltd thank you
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much for your interest in our inspection
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, We would take this opportunity to introduce ourselves as a competent & professional inspection
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services
in following scope of works:

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Marine survey

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Import- export cargo survey

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Petroleum and chemical products survey

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Property & technical survey

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much experience in:

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Protecting our clients’ right interests
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has been earning with a high reputation, confidence, supports from our sincere clients and become leading surveyor in domestic and oversea. We are executing
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survey
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services
on behalf of the well-known insurers / underwriters, agents, brokers,
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P&I
clubs,
namely
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Petrolimex
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Corp. (
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Corp. (PTI),
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Corp,
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Military
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Corp. (MIC), Bank for Investment & Development of Vietnam
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Corp. (BIC),
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We would attach herewith our
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company
profile and tariff for your
further
reference and considering of using our
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survey
services.

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further
information.
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IELTS letter We, The AON Inspection and Trading Service Co. Ltd thank you very much for your interest in our inspection services, We would take this opportunity to introduce ourselves as a competent & professional inspection services in following scope of works: - Marine survey - Import- export cargo survey - Petroleum and chemical products survey - Property & technical survey - Risk Assessment Having surveyed thousands of cases, AONSER has learnt so much experience in: - Protecting our clients’ right interests as well as dealing with the opponents; and surveying, investigating the nature causes and extent of damage to almost types of properties, machinery & equipment, cargo, containers, vessels, wharf, jetty, port equipment’s, etc. Establishing quantum and applying policy condition; and Recommending, offering, applying measures of loss / damage prevention, mitigation; and Corresponding, communicating, negotiating on behalf of clients, etc. AONSER has been earning with a high reputation, conf

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