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you recently bought a expensive product from a store

you recently bought a expensive product from a store 8dmLw

Dear sir/madam, My name is Devender, I am the most regular customer at your shop. I am writing this letter to officially report for the faulty washing machine. I bought this last week. I visited your store one week ago and there was a big deal on washing machines. In addition, there was 20 percent off on LG machines and 25 percent off on the rest of them. I decided to buy LG because of its many features and advanced technology. However, when I brought it home it did not work, it seemed like an electronic fault. Moreover, staff have to check the items every day so customers do not have problems like I had last week. It is also the manager’s responsibility to assess everything before selling their products. This is truly an upsetting situation for a very popular shop which is famous for its services. Furthermore, they have to do something to solve this problem, otherwise they will end up losing their regular customers. Also, I am expecting my item to be replaced as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully, Devender

Dear sir/madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Defender
Devender
, I am the most regular customer at your shop. I am writing this letter to officially
 report for the faulty washing machine. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 this last week.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 visited your store When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-week"one-week
one week
 ago and there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 deal on washing machines. In addition
, there was 20 percent off on LG machines and 25 percent off on the rest of them. I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 LG This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 features and advanced technology. However
, when I brought it home it did not work, it seemed like an electronic fault. Moreover
, staff This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the items every day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 customers do not have problems like I had last week. It is also
 the manager’s responsibility to assess everything This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 selling their products.

This is truly
 an upsetting situation for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 popular shop which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for its services. Furthermore
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do something to solve this problem, otherwise
 they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up losing their regular customers. Also
, I am expecting my item to be replaced
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Defender
Devender