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Aishwarya, online customer of amazon bought a product on 23/11/2021 - You going to complain about the product as your are not happy with that - In this letter you are going to explain your situation - What are things that you don’t like about the product? - What action you want to take?

Aishwarya, online customer of amazon bought a product on 23/11/2021 - You going to complain about the product as your are not happy with that - In this letter you are going to explain your situation - What are things that you don’t like about the product? - What action you want to take? RRx8k
I am writing this letter to inform you about the product that I had purchased on 23th Nov 2021 from your online platform. Since many years I am connected with your organization. However, I had buy many of expensive products from amazon and never had a bad experience. But recently I had experience with very awful situation which was about the product. The item was a HRX jacket with cost of rupees 2999. While adding to the cart the picture of that jacket was very attractive with the navy blue color with the back cap. But when I received the product the color of it was very faded and the quality of fabric was very lean. It seems very unsatisfying. Hence, I would like request to arrange a pay buy for my product via Online mode. As I have your prime membership I wish I would get your revert at earliest.
I am writing this letter to inform you about the
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product
that I had
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purchased
on
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23th Nov 2021
from your online platform.
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Since
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many
years I
am connected
with your organization.
However
, I had
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buy
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many
of expensive
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products
from
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amazon
and never had a
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bad
experience.
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But
recently I had experience with
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very
awful situation which was about the
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product
. The item was a
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HRX
jacket with cost of rupees 2999.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
adding to the cart the picture of that jacket was
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very
attractive with the navy blue color with the back cap.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
when I received the
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product
the color of it was
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very
faded and the quality of fabric was
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very
lean. It seems
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very
unsatisfying.

Hence
, I would like request to arrange a pay
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
via Online mode.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I have your prime membership I wish I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your revert at earliest.
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IELTS letter Aishwarya, online customer of amazon bought a product on 23/11/2021 - You going to complain about the product as your are not happy with that - In this letter you are going to explain your situation - What are things that you don’t like about the product? - What action you want to take?

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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