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Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathy Include memories you have about the dog Invite your friend to do something with you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathy Include memories you have about the dog Invite your friend to do something with you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___, xAro
Dear Jhon, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and best of spirit. My deepest condolence with you and your family on hearing the news that you lost your dog Tyson last Sunday. He was a gentle soul more over after living for so long with you he become part of your life. May god bless him and rest in peace. I was telling this saddened news to my family, All the funny incident rewind to me like a movie. Whenever I visited you Tyson always recognize me he will wiggle his tail and make funny sounds, Even more he will follow me where ever I go. Thinking about it made me smile but also feel immensely emotional that we lost a soul who is part of the family. I was thinking that in these hard times may be you should visit me on weekend. Change in place might help with coping the stress also there is an animal fair being held on Sunday at exhibition ground in my town, If we get lucky we might find you a new pet, I know its very difficult for him to take Tysons place in your family but he can make his own new family and help you get rid of all the sorrow and pain. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours lovingly
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, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and best of spirit. My deepest condolence with you and your
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on hearing the
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that you lost your dog Tyson last Sunday. He was a gentle soul more over after living for
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he become part of your life. May god bless him and rest in peace.

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to my
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, All the
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incident rewind to me like a movie. Whenever I visited you Tyson always recognize me he will wiggle his tail and
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sounds, Even more he will follow me where ever I go. Thinking about it made me smile
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emotional that we lost a soul who is part of the family.

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you should visit me on weekend.
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being held
on Sunday at exhibition ground in my town, If we
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lucky we might find you a
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pet, I know its
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difficult for him to take
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rid of all the sorrow and pain. Looking forward
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from you.

Yours
lovingly
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IELTS letter Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathy Include memories you have about the dog Invite your friend to do something with you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

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