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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. Jr9k
Dear Mr. Neighbour, I am writing this letter as an opportunity to let you know that we are moving in right next to your wonderful house and treat this as an invitation to a small party which we are planning to organize. As I am a retired army officer, I always wanted to settle down in a locality that is peaceful as well as lively. We have shifted recently from ABC location and it's our privilege to reside beside your house. As we have decided to move next week, we have arranged a small gathering, which involves close family and relatives and it would be an immense pleasure if you would come and join the party as it would allow us to know more about each other. Lastly, I feel ecstatic to live in such a posh area and especially, besides such an amazing neighbours. I would like to apologize in advance for any nuisance or inconvenience, which may happen to you during party hours. Your cooperation is highly appreciable. Yours Sincerely, PQR
Dear Mr.
Possible spelling mistake. 'Neighbour' is British English.
Neighbour
,

I am writing this letter as an opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that we are moving in right
next
to your wonderful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and treat this as an invitation to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
party which we are planning to organize.

As I am a retired army officer, I always wanted to settle down in a locality
that is
peaceful
as well
as lively. We have shifted recently from ABC location and it's our privilege to reside beside your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

As we have decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
next
week, we have arranged a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
gathering, which involves close family and relatives and it would be an immense pleasure if you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the party as it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
us to know more about each other.

Lastly
, I feel ecstatic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in such a posh area and
especially
,
besides
such an amazing
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "neighbour"?
neighbours
. I would like to apologize in advance for any nuisance or inconvenience, which may happen to you during party hours. Your cooperation is
highly
appreciable.

Yours
Sincerely
,

PQR

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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172 words
6.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.