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Last mondayyou flew from Newyork to Dubai. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. - Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain where and when you lost your bag, describe your bag and contents of the bag.

Last mondayyou flew from Newyork to Dubai. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. - Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain where and when you lost your bag, describe your bag and contents of the bag. P1OJ
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to informe you that I forgot my bag in the cabine which I flew Newyork to Dubai couple of days ago. My ticket number was R32 and PNR-SUKA08456891. The bag was GUCCI brand, two semicircle handle three partition and brown colour. Name plat is front of th bag. In the bag all credit card, one i phone and Some important paper. When I entered airline, my cabin was full. So I had put the bag next to my seats. The plan was landing that time I hurry because boarding my next flight start. So this reasons I forgot my handle bag. I request you to please search the cabin bag in your airlines. If it is there you can call me and I collect the bag. If it is not there earlier inform me because stop the cards immediately. You know more details about my bag you can call me or you can mail in this ID maya@yahoo. com I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rinkal Makasana.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
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informe
you that I forgot my
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bag
in the
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cabine
which I flew
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Newyork
to Dubai couple of days ago.

My ticket number was R32 and PNR-SUKA08456891. The
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bag
was GUCCI brand, two semicircle
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handle
three partition and brown
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colour
. Name plat is front of
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th
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bag
. In the
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bag
all credit card, one
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i
phone and
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Some
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important
paper.

When I entered airline, my cabin was full.
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So
I had put the
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bag
next
to my seats. The plan was landing that time I hurry
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because
boarding my
next
flight
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start
.
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So
this reasons I forgot my handle bag.

I request you to
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please
search the cabin
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bag
in your airlines. If it is there you can call me and I collect the
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bag
. If it is not there earlier inform me
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because
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stop
the cards immediately. You know more
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details
about my
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bag
you can call me or you can mail in this ID
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maya@yahoo
.
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com


I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Rinkal
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Makasana
.
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IELTS letter Last mondayyou flew from Newyork to Dubai. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. - Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain where and when you lost your bag, describe your bag and contents of the bag.

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  American English
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177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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