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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation.

You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation. VXLK
Dear Mark, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit, The purpose of this letter is to thank you personally for looking after my home and two pets in our absence, Tyson and Bruno two Pomeranian are very gentle dogs on the contrary they can't survive without us for long. We are very Great full for your consideration. Trust me never felt that we neglected our Pets all credit goes to you and your time to time filling us in with video calls about their well being. Really appreciated your gesture. Your unforgettable Favor made our trip immensely pleasurable and relaxing. We really needed a break from stress full working routine. Consequently this trip heal us and now we can get back in to our normal routine. Thank you for your generosity. Me and my wife owe you big time for this supreme help. We want to take you for lavish dinner more over I have to share a lot of nostalgic incidents. Time and venue can be decided on the phone. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours immensely
Dear Mark, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit, The purpose of this letter is to thank you
personally
for looking after my home and two pets in our absence, Tyson and Bruno two Pomeranian are
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very
gentle dogs
on the contrary
they can't survive without us for long. We are
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very
Great full for your consideration. Trust me never felt that we neglected our Pets all credit goes to you and your
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time
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
filling us in with video calls about their
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well being
.
Really
appreciated your gesture.

Your unforgettable Favor made our trip
immensely
pleasurable and relaxing. We
really
needed a break from
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stress
full working routine.
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Consequently
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this trip heal
us and
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now
we can
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get
back in to our normal routine. Thank you for your generosity.

When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.
Me
and my wife owe you
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big
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time
for this supreme
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help
. We want to take you for lavish dinner more over I
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have to
share
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a lot of
nostalgic incidents.
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Time
and venue can
be decided
on the phone. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
immensely
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IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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