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your friend wrote to you asking for advice how to manage her time efficiently while preparin an exam what to do relieve an anxiety before an exam

your friend wrote to you asking for advice how to manage her time efficiently while preparin an exam what to do relieve an anxiety before an exam lLgOo
Dear Kate, Thank you for your asking me advice. I hope things will get better with the help of my advice. First of all, I suggest that you should make a routine about your doings during the day. In spite of lack of time, you should cram on your exam. It`s better to try not to watch TV or surf the Internet or hang out with your friends for the time being. Also, I think evening is the most appropriate time for doing your household chores. Because at the end of the day your brain is tired too. What`s more you should prepare yourself for an exam psychologically in advance. Believe in yourself because you have been brushing up for 3 months. Moreover, it`s better to concentrate and calm down before entering the exam. I trust you will accept my advice. Let me know what happens. Best wishes, Aziza
Dear Kate,

Thank you for your asking me
advice
.

I hope things will
get
better with the
help
of my advice.
First of all
, I suggest that you should
make
a routine about your doings during the day.
In spite of
lack of time, you should cram on your exam.
It`s
better to try not to
watch
TV or surf the Internet or hang out with your friends for the time being.

Also
, I
think
evening is the most appropriate time for doing your household chores.
Because
at the
end
of the day your brain
is tired
too.

What`s
more you should prepare yourself for an exam
psychologically
in advance. Believe in yourself
because
you have been brushing up for 3 months.
Moreover
,
it`s
better to concentrate and calm down
before
entering the exam.

I trust you will accept my advice.
Let
me know what happens.

Best wishes,

Aziza
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IELTS letter your friend wrote to you asking for advice how to manage her time efficiently while preparin an exam what to do relieve an anxiety before an exam

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148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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