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You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new computer restaurant .

You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new computer restaurant. bxMJl
Dear Mr Smith. I am writing to tell you about my problem of residence me near your restaurant became very noisy and uncomfortable. Althought, I am pleased that we have this facility the restaurant remains opens all day long and till midnight. It has a lot of noisy and motorbikes pollute, somebody who quarrel each other when I want to sleep. It is unpleasant for me and my neighbor. Loudly music sound intrude us doing lesson at night. Moreover, there are lots of sick people live near me, so they wants to relax in the evening without difficulties. In additional, I do not do my lessons cause of aloud of songs. I would like to suggest you should change the table of the guests hall. You can open it at nine am and you may close it at twenty one p m by the way you helped us to do all responsibilities with quality way. Thanks for your attention to this important matter. School leaders. Anna Mixalia.
Dear Mr Smith. I am writing to
tell
you about my problem of residence me near your restaurant became
very
noisy and uncomfortable.
Althought
, I am
pleased
that we have this facility the restaurant remains opens all day long and till midnight. It has
a lot of
noisy and motorbikes pollute, somebody who quarrel each other when I want to sleep. It is unpleasant for me and my neighbor.
Loudly
music sound intrude us doing lesson at night.
Moreover
, there are lots of sick
people
live
near me,
so
they
wants
to relax in the evening without difficulties. In additional, I do not do my lessons cause of aloud of songs. I would like to suggest you should
change
the table of the
guests
hall. You can open it at nine am and you may close it at
twenty one
p m by the way you
helped
us to do all responsibilities with quality way. Thanks for your attention to this
important
matter. School leaders. Anna
Mixalia
.
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IELTS letter You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new computer restaurant.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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