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My brother, the sports fan

My brother, the sports fan DwpGm
his bedroom looks like a used sporting goods store. Bob owns skis tennis racquets golf clubs footballs basketballs baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a bicycle and weights. his bedroom looks like a used sporting goods store. Bob owns skis tennis racquets golf clubs footballs basketballs baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a bicycle and weights. his bedroom looks like a used sporting goods store. Bob owns skis tennis racquets golf clubs footballs basketballs baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a bicycle and weights. his bedroom looks like a used sporting goods store. Bob owns skis tennis racquets golf clubs footballs basketballs baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a bicycle and weights.
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skis tennis racquets golf
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his
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bedroom
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looks
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used
sporting
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goods
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store
. Bob
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owns
skis tennis racquets golf
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clubs
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footballs
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basketballs
baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a
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bicycle
and
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weights
.
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his
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bedroom
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looks
like a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
sporting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
. Bob
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owns
skis tennis racquets golf
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clubs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
footballs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
basketballs
baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycle
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weights
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bedroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
looks
like a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
sporting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
. Bob
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owns
skis tennis racquets golf
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clubs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
footballs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
basketballs
baseballs tennis balls soccer balls a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycle
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weights
.
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IELTS letter My brother, the sports fan

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  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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