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the system used for garbage system is not working in your area. write a letter to the mayor of your urban council

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Dear Sir, Garbage collection system in the city I am writing this letter with regards to the problems causing due to the improper collection of rubbish in our area. It was brought to our notice that the schedules used to collect dump are not performed by the responsible personal at the given time frame. Hence, the occupiers of the area experience a bad smell which cause health effects. The neighbors have got used to spray chemicals on the road to prevent the spread of germs but the case has become worsen with the increase of flies population on the roads. We have informed the issue to the health care personals to attend immediately to prevent the circulation of infectious diseases. The cost of materials for cleaning the trunks has to be beard by the people in the area. I would like to suggest implementing a shramadaana campaign with the association of the villagers to clean up the town. We will need a contribution of solid wast recycling companies to analyse the content and submit the possible quantities for recycling purposes. We expect your attention as early as possible on this regards and look forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Thilanka
Dear Sir,

Garbage collection system in the city

I am writing this letter
with regards to
the problems causing due to the improper collection of rubbish in our area. It
was brought
to our notice that the schedules
used
to collect dump are not performed by the responsible personal at the
given
time frame.
Hence
, the occupiers of the area experience a
bad
smell which cause health effects.

The neighbors have
got
used
to spray chemicals on the road to
prevent
the spread of germs
but
the case has become worsen with the increase of flies population on the roads. We have informed the issue to the health care personals to attend immediately to
prevent
the circulation of infectious diseases. The cost of materials for cleaning the trunks
has to
be
beard
by the
people
in the area.

I would like to suggest implementing a
shramadaana
campaign with the association of the villagers to clean up the town. We will need a contribution of solid wast recycling
companies
to
analyse
the content and submit the possible quantities for recycling purposes.

We
expect
your attention as early as possible on
this
regards and look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you,

Yours
sincerely
,
Thilanka
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IELTS letter the system used for garbage system is not working in your area. write a letter to the mayor of your urban council

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  American English
8 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
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