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I was pleasantly surprised to receive your gift yesterday. can you tell me about the most favourite gift you have recevied?

I was pleasantly surprised to receive your gift yesterday. can you tell me about the most favourite gift you have recevied? QR031
Dear Kavin, I am writing this letter in response to your letter. I am glad to know that you liked the birthday present I sent you earlier. I will share with you the most meaningful gift I have received so far. It was a beautiful notebook I received from my parents for my 18th birthday. The notebook is made of leather, is dark blue, and has my name engraved on it. However, the most special thing about this notebook is a page with birthday wishes from my parents. They just expect me to grow up healthy and happy in the future. This has made me very touched and grateful for her nurturing. I do hope that you enjoy this story and happy birthday to you again. Yours faithfully, Your friend.
Dear
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Kavin
,

I am writing this letter in response to your letter. I am glad to know that you liked the birthday present I
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sent
you earlier.

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I
will share with you the most meaningful gift I have received
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so
far. It was a
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beautiful
notebook I received from my parents for my 18th birthday. The notebook
is made
of leather, is dark blue, and has my name engraved on it.
However
, the most special thing about this notebook is a page with birthday wishes from my parents. They
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
me to grow up healthy and happy in the future. This has made me
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very
touched and grateful for her nurturing.

I do hope that you enjoy this story and happy birthday to you again.

Yours
faithfully
,

Your friend.

IELTS letter I was pleasantly surprised to receive your gift yesterday. can you tell me about the most favourite gift you have recevied?

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  American English
6 paragraphs
130 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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