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You are invited to the conference to Moscow.Before conference you have to visit "The high quality guest house" in Moscow.Write your demads about the house and conference hall.

You are invited to the conference to Moscow. Before conference you have to visit "The high quality guest house" in Moscow. Write your demads about the house and conference hall. nX23l
Dear, conference maganerI am writing to you about my visit to Moscow. I am invited to the conference about "Methods of language teaching". I will have been for two weeks in Moscow. I am taking part in conference with my speech and methods. I need a house to stay in Moscow. Next week I will be there. So I want to live temporary in a high quality guest house and to have a magnificient quality in the conference hall. I would like that the room of guest house is broad and light, also it is preferably single room. Accommodation has a view of city from the window. Furthermore, I need some equipments there. There must be computer, fridge, flat sreen TV, writing table and chair in my room. Moreover, If you have possibility, I want to be servant that only belongs to me. If you can help me, I would be content. I am looking forward to answering my requests about guest house. Yours faithfully, Sitora Amrilloyeva
Dear,
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conference
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maganerI
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am
writing to you about my visit to Moscow. I
am invited
to the
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conference
about
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"
Methods of language teaching
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"
. I will have been for two weeks in Moscow.
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I
am taking part in
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conference
with my speech and methods.
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I
need a
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house
to stay in Moscow.
Next
week I will be there.
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So
I want to
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live
temporary in a high quality guest
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house
and to have a
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magnificient
quality in the
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conference
hall. I would like that the room of guest
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house
is broad and light,
also
it is
preferably
single room. Accommodation has a view of city from the window.
Furthermore
, I need
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some
equipments there. There
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must
be computer, fridge, flat
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sreen
TV, writing table and chair in my room.
Moreover
, If you have possibility, I want to be servant that
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only
belongs to me. If you can
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help
me, I would be content. I am looking forward to answering my requests about guest
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house
. Yours
faithfully
,
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Sitora
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Amrilloyeva
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IELTS letter You are invited to the conference to Moscow. Before conference you have to visit "The high quality guest house" in Moscow. Write your demads about the house and conference hall.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
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