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Your friend will come here and want to live with you. Unfortunately, this is impossible. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should Explain reasons Suggest other alternatives for accommodation Apologise for your refusal

Your friend will come here and want to live with you. Unfortunately, this is impossible. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should Explain reasons Suggest other alternatives for accommodation Apologise for your refusal NYo2
Dear Susan, Thanks for your letter. I’m delighted to hear that you are coming to Auckland next week. I’m so sorry to tell you that my parents-in-law are staying with us now, therefore there’s no spare room in my house. You know, my daughter is in first grade this year, and my husband and I cannot get off work before 5pm, so we had to ask his parents to live here and pick up our daughter from school every day. But don’t worry, there are many hotels at different price levels in every district of Auckland. And the Silver Holiday Hotel is one of the nearest to my home. It’s a four-star luxury hotel with very reasonable prices. I strongly recommend you to choose this one. I want to apologise for my refusal again. And I will be very glad if you can come to my house and have dinner with us. Here is my address: 18 South Road, Flat Bush. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon. Mia
Dear Susan,

Thanks for your letter. I’m delighted to hear that you are coming to Auckland
next
week.

I’m
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sorry to
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tell
you that my parents-in-law are staying with us
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now
,
therefore
there’s no spare room in my
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house
. You know, my daughter is in
first
grade this year, and my husband and I cannot
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get
off work
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before
5pm,
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so
we had to ask his parents to
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live
here and pick up our daughter from school every day.

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But
don’t worry, there are
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many
hotels at
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different
price levels in every district of Auckland. And the Silver Holiday Hotel is one of the nearest to my home. It’s a four-star luxury hotel with
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very
reasonable prices. I
strongly
recommend you to choose this one.

I want to
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apologise
for my refusal again. And I will be
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very
glad if you can
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come
to my
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house
and have dinner with us. Here is my address: 18 South Road, Flat Bush.

I’m looking forward to seeing you
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soon
.

Mia
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IELTS letter Your friend will come here and want to live with you. Unfortunately, this is impossible. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should Explain reasons Suggest other alternatives for accommodation Apologise for your refusal

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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