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An English-speaking friend has written to ask you for help in arranging accommodation in your town / city when they visit next month. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • give details of some accommodation you think is suitable for him/her • suggest what your friend should bring with them • Recommend some places for him/her to visit on the trip

An English-speaking friend has written to ask you for help in arranging accommodation in your town / city when they visit next month. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • give details of some accommodation you think is suitable for him/her • suggest what your friend should bring with them • Recommend some places for him/her to visit on the trip kJwK
Hey John, How are you doing? Have you started packing for the trip? I can’t believe next month this time you’ll be here in my town. I am so excited! Anyway, I thought I would drop a line about the questions you asked in your last mail. Well, as you’re a solo traveller, you can stay at the Glam Hostel. I’ve heard that their rooms are wonderful, and they offer economical packages for long stay. Also, there is another 4 star motel just 15 minutes’ walk from the beach. Their ocean-facing rooms are worth dying for. As you are coming next month, it will be peak summers. So, I suggest that you pack loose cotton clothes and carry a big bottle of sunscreen with you. Also, bring your sports shoes for trekking and flip flops for the beach. You’re visiting my city at a wonderful time, as next month there is a summer carnival on the main street, which is a must watch. Also, do you like surfing? There are free classes hosted by Surf Club on the beach, and you won’t regret attending them. Anyway, let me know if you need more details. I can’t wait to see you. Warm Regards, Maya
Hey John,

How are you doing? Have you
started
packing for the trip? I can’t believe
next
month this time you’ll be here in my town. I am
so
excited! Anyway, I
thought
I would drop a line about the questions you asked in your last mail.

Well, as you’re a solo
traveller
, you can stay at the Glam Hostel. I’ve heard that their rooms are wonderful, and they offer economical packages for long stay.
Also
, there is another
4 star
motel
just
15 minutes’ walk from the beach. Their ocean-facing rooms are worth dying for.

As you are coming
next
month, it will be peak summers.
So
, I suggest that you pack loose cotton clothes and carry a
big
bottle of sunscreen with you.

Also
, bring your sports shoes for trekking and
flip flops
for the beach.

You’re visiting my city at a wonderful time, as
next
month there is a summer carnival on the main street, which is a
must
watch
.
Also
, do you like surfing? There are free classes hosted by Surf Club on the beach, and you won’t regret attending them.

Anyway,
let
me know if you need more
details
. I can’t wait to
see
you.

Warm Regards,

Maya
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IELTS letter An English-speaking friend has written to ask you for help in arranging accommodation in your town / city when they visit next month. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • give details of some accommodation you think is suitable for him/her • suggest what your friend should bring with them • Recommend some places for him/her to visit on the trip

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
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