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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: jpKL
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a tenant who rented your house for one year. I am writing to complaint about the furniture I got with the house on 15th July. I am living with my family in building number 2, flat number 42. When I rented the house I was assured that, the furniture in the house is in good condition. However, I was quick to notice fault on the sofa and the bed as there were noises coming, whenever someone tries to sleep, sit or turn on the sofa or the bed. As a result, I have received a lot of complaints from the neighbors regarding the noises from the furniture. I have tried to contact someone to oil the beds and the sofa to avoid the noises. However, there has been no response. I would request you for an immediate change in the furniture, as it is extremely disappointing live with such unsatisfactory furniture. Furthermore, I would also request appropriate compensation for the inconvenience caused to me and my family. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a tenant who rented your
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house
for one year. I am writing to complaint about the
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furniture
I
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got
with the
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house
on 15th July.

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I
am living with my family in building number 2, flat number 42. When I rented the
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house
I
was assured
that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
is in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition.
However
, I was quick to notice fault on the sofa and the bed as there were noises coming, whenever someone tries to sleep, sit or turn on the sofa or the bed.
As a result
, I have received
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a lot of
complaints from the neighbors regarding the noises from the furniture.

I have tried to contact someone to oil the beds and the sofa to avoid the noises.
However
, there has been no response. I would request you for an immediate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
, as it is
extremely
disappointing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with such unsatisfactory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
.
Furthermore
, I would
also
request appropriate compensation for the inconvenience caused to me and my family.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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