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You will move to a new city for one-year work. Your friend said that he would help you find accommodation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should Express thanks to your friend Explain which district you would like to live in Describe what type of room you would like to rent

You will move to a new city for one-year work. Your friend said that he would help you find accommodation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should Express thanks to your friend Explain which district you would like to live in Describe what type of room you would like to rent 1GLN

Dear Susan, I’m very grateful to receive your letter on March 20 in which you said you were going to help me find accommodation in Auckland. You know you’ve solved a big problem for me. One of my colleagues in Auckland told me that there’re terrible traffic jams during rush hours every working day in the city centre. He suggested that I find an apartment near our company. So the ideal location would be within 15 minutes’ walk from Sky Tower, or some place where I can take a bus to Sky Tower in 30 minutes. As for the house itself, I don’t actually have many requirements. It can be one room in a house or a one-bedroom apartment. I’m totally fine with that as long as there’s a modern kitchen that I can use freely. You know, cooking is my biggest hobby. Thanks again for your help and see you soon. Mia

Dear Susan,

I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful to receive your letter on March 20 in which you said you were going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me find accommodation in Auckland. You know you’ve solved a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 problem for me.

One of my colleagues in Auckland This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that there’re terrible traffic jams during rush hours every working day in the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. He suggested that I find an apartment near our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 the ideal location would be within 15 minutes’ walk from Sky Tower, or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 place where I can take a bus to Sky Tower in 30 minutes.

As for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 itself, I don’t actually have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 requirements. It can be one room in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 or a one-bedroom apartment. I’m totally
 fine with that as long as there’s a modern kitchen that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
freely
. You know, cooking is my biggest hobby.

Thanks again for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Mia