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You have a friend who is going to move to your city with her child. Write a letter to her. In the letter, you should Introduce your local living environment Give information on the local schools Make recommendations on the schools

You have a friend who is going to move to your city with her child. Write a letter to her. In the letter, you should Introduce your local living environment Give information on the local schools Make recommendations on the schools xjV9
Dear Susan, I’m very delighted to learn that you are going to move to my city with your daughter. I’ll tell you some information about life here, which I’m sure you will be interested of. Perhaps you’ve already known that this city has a nick name: Spring City. It means the temperature here is always not too high or low, and there are various types of flowers throughout the year. Besides, you do not need to worry about the housing condition, because both buying and renting are inexpensive, comparing with other cities in our country. Speaking of schools, there are several local schools, including primary schools, middle schools and high schools. However, currently, we don’t have any university here, which I don’t think you need to care about, for your daughter is only 5. I would like to recommend Central School and King’s School. They are the two best primary schools in the city. You can visit their websites to gain more information in advance. And after you arrive here, you can visit the schools and ask questions face to face. I hope these can help you. See you soon, Mia
Dear Susan,

I’m
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delighted to learn that you are going to
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move
to my city with your daughter. I’ll
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tell
you
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some
information about life here, which I’m sure you will
be interested
of.

Perhaps you’ve already known that this city has a nick name: Spring City. It means the temperature here is always not too high or low, and there are various types of flowers throughout the year.
Besides
, you do not need to worry about the housing condition,
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because
both buying and renting are inexpensive, comparing with other
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cities
in our country.

Speaking of
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schools
, there are several local
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schools
, including primary
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schools
, middle
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schools
and high
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schools
.
However
,
currently
, we don’t have any university here, which I don’t
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think
you need to care about, for your daughter is
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only
5.

I would like to recommend Central
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School
and King’s
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School
. They are the two best primary
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schools
in the city. You can visit their websites to gain more information in advance. And after you arrive here, you can visit the
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schools
and ask questions face to face.

I hope these can
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help
you.

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See
you
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soon
,

Mia

IELTS letter You have a friend who is going to move to your city with her child. Write a letter to her. In the letter, you should Introduce your local living environment Give information on the local schools Make recommendations on the schools

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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