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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. 6DEl
Dear Mr. Thomas, I am your new neighbor, I recently moved into flat no 3 on the third floor. I am writing this letter to inform you about a party that I will be throwing on 15th July, Friday. I have recently started working at ABC Ltd, so to break the ice with my colleagues and seniors at work, I will be inviting them over at my place at around 8 p. m. there will be around 30 people at my place. Since, the party will have music, dance and drinks which will later be followed by karaoke, it will get slightly noisy. I know you are an early riser and I do not want to cause any nuisance to you. I also got information from a friend of mine living next door to you that you too have worked at ABC Ltd. It will be my pleasure to invite you and your family to my party. Hope to see you, Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Mr. Thomas,

I am your new neighbor, I recently
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moved
into flat no 3 on the third floor. I am writing this letter to inform you about a party that I will be throwing on 15th July, Friday.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
working at ABC Ltd,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
to break the ice with my colleagues and seniors at work, I will be inviting them over at my place at around 8 p. m. there will be around 30
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
at my place. Since, the party will have music, dance and drinks which will later
be followed
by karaoke, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
slightly
noisy. I know you are an early riser and I do not want to cause any nuisance to you.

I
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
information from a friend of mine living
next
door to you that you
Did you mean "to"?
too
have worked at ABC Ltd. It will be my pleasure to invite you and your family to my party.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you,

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.