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school trip for children and parents are allowed and explain why they are interested to come

school trip for children and parents are allowed and explain why they are interested to come LJQR

Dear MS. Jessica, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to join with children for a school trip. It was great pleasure to be a part of excursion and i have been waiting for that day to join with you all. To be extremely honest, I have been swamped with joy when I heard the news from the adolescents. Moreover, as I was a wanderlust person, really fascinate to catch up such an excellent moment. Hopefully, I had knew some of the places in France where youth can engage with plethora of activities. On the other hand, there will be a play stations where off springs could escort the acquiring a incredible knowledge as well as by playing games too. In spite of this, I could help you out for young people with an immense guidance about museums and other elucidations. I would like to ask clarifications regarding our outing. Can I know the how many days the Jaunt will be along with that how much money we need to spend on a journey. Please let me know the above details. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to take part in your progress. Thanking you in advancesincerely, Jessica

Dear MS. Jessica, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 with children for a school trip. It was great pleasure to be a part of excursion and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have been waiting for that day to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 with you all. To be extremely
 honest, I have been swamped
 with joy when I heard the news from the adolescents. Moreover
, as I was a wanderlust person, really
 fascinate to catch up such an excellent moment. Hopefully
, I had Use past participle here: "known".known
knew
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 places in France where youth can engage with plethora of activities. On the other hand
, there will be a play stations where off springs could escort the acquiring Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "incredible knowledge".incredible knowledge
a incredible knowledge
as well
 as by playing games too. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 this, I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you out for young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with an immense guidance about museums and other elucidations. I would like to ask clarifications regarding our outing. Can I know Did you mean "how"?how
the how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 days the Jaunt will be along with that how much money we need to spend on a journey. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know the above This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. I would greatly
 appreciate the opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in your progress. Thanking you in Possible spelling mistake found.advance sincerely
advancesincerely
, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphJessica.Jessica!Jessica?Jessica:Jessica,Jessica;
Jessica