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Your friend wants you to go on holiday together but it's to a place you're not keen on.Write a letter persuading your friend to go somewhere you'd like to go to.

Your friend wants you to go on holiday together but it's to a place you're not keen on. Write a letter persuading your friend to go somewhere you'd like to go to. oRDEX
Dear Alice, I was so delighted when I received your letter last week. As you know, we have planned wonderful summer-holiday three months ago eventhough summer days have not begun yet. I read in your about your holiday-plans. I am pleased with your idea that is relevant to going to India, however I am not able to prefer visiting there as I have some problems. Firstly, the wheather in India may make me unconscious and too tired. Some years ago I told you that I and high temperature are the best enemies. In addition, I suggest you that we should go to any state where is situated in Europe. In fact, I am interested in neither the culture of India nor the Indians' customers. I would like to visit Turkey with you provide you agree with me. Please, believe me! We will manage to pass an enjoyable time during the holiday in Turkey. I look forward to your answer-letter. Lots of love, Aziza.
Dear Alice, I was
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delighted when I received your letter last week. As you know, we have planned wonderful summer-holiday three months ago
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eventhough
summer days have not begun
yet
. I read in your about your holiday-plans. I am
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pleased
with your
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idea
that is
relevant to going to India,
however
I am not able to prefer visiting there as I have
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some
problems.
Firstly
, the
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wheather
in India may
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make
me unconscious and too tired.
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Some
years ago I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
you that I and high temperature are the best enemies.
In addition
, I suggest you that we should go to any state where
is situated
in Europe. In fact, I
am interested
in neither the culture of India nor the Indians' customers. I would like to visit Turkey with you provide you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with me.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, believe me! We will manage to pass an enjoyable time during the holiday in Turkey. I look forward to your answer-letter. Lots of
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love
,
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Aziza
.
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IELTS letter Your friend wants you to go on holiday together but it's to a place you're not keen on. Write a letter persuading your friend to go somewhere you'd like to go to.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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