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Your friend wants to get fit and healthy. Write a letter to him/her in which you:

Your friend wants to get fit and healthy. Write a letter to him/her in which you: PXV9E
Hello Sabina, How is everything going? I hope you are in good health and in high spirits. It was great to receive your letter and I think that it's awesome that you take care of your health. One way or another, we all must keep fit to feel energetic. And I want to share some advice on how to be in good shape. Firstly, you ought to exercise and you can choose any kind of working out: pilates, aerobics, stretching or even dancing. Secondly, you you should definitely cut on sugar and junk food that you consume, add more fruit and vegetables into your diet. As far as I know, eating healthy food doesn’t mean giving up your favourite foods. Your favourite recipes can be adapted easily to provide a healthier alternative. For example, non-stick cookware can be used to reduce the need for cooking oil. Besides, you can steam, bake, grill, braise, boil or microwave your foods, rather than deep fry them. For example, one of the easiest and healthiest ways is to bake fish in parchment paper, but broiling is another easy option for when you want something quick and crispy. Also, you should try baking or grilling vegetables and then toss them in a salad, put them on a sandwich, or eat them plain. Finally, I'd like to tell you about how I lost 7 kilos last summer. I had tried a plenty of methods to lose weight but I didn't achieve my weight loss goals. Then, out of the blue, I came across a notable fitness instructor. He created a hypocaloric diet plan and special working out programme. I ended up losting 7 kilos. After that I was on cloud nine because of taking that small victory. That's all for now. I have to go. I hope this will be of help. I suppose you will want to know much more about a hypocaloric diet. If you want, I'll write you about it next time. By the way, how many kilos would you like to lose? Please write me back as soon as possible. Warm wishes, Tori
Hello Sabina,

How is everything going? I hope you are in
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good
health and in high spirits. It was great to receive your letter and I
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think
that it's awesome that you take care of your health.

One way or another, we all
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must
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keep
fit to feel energetic. And I
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want
to share
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some
advice on how to be in
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good
shape.
Firstly
, you ought to exercise and you can choose any kind of working out:
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pilates
, aerobics, stretching or even dancing.
Secondly
,
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you you
should definitely
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cut
on sugar and junk
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food
that you consume,
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add
more fruit and vegetables into your diet.

As far as I know, eating healthy
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food
doesn’t mean giving up your
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favourite
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foods
. Your
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favourite
recipes can
be adapted
easily
to provide a healthier alternative.
For example
, non-stick cookware can be
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used
to
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reduce
the need for cooking oil.
Besides
, you can steam, bake, grill, braise, boil or microwave your
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foods
,
rather
than
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deep fry
them.
For example
, one of the easiest and healthiest ways is to bake fish in parchment paper,
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but
broiling is another easy option for when you
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want
something quick and crispy.
Also
, you should try baking or grilling vegetables and then toss them in a salad, put them on a sandwich, or eat them plain.

Finally
, I'd like to
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tell
you about how I lost 7 kilos last summer. I had tried a
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plenty
of methods to lose weight
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but
I didn't achieve my weight loss goals. Then, out of the blue, I came across a notable fitness instructor. He created a
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hypocaloric
diet plan and special working out
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programme
. I ended up
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losting
7 kilos.
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After
that I was on cloud nine
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because
of taking that
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small
victory.

That's all for
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now
. I
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have to
go. I hope this will be of
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help
.
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I
suppose you will
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want
to know much more about a
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hypocaloric
diet. If you
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want
, I'll write you about it
next
time. By the way, how
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many
kilos would you like to lose?
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Please
write me back as
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soon
as possible.

Warm wishes,

Tori
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IELTS letter Your friend wants to get fit and healthy. Write a letter to him/her in which you:

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  American English
8 paragraphs
350 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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