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You have seen an advertisement from a austrailian couple who teaches their kids your language for a year.

You have seen an advertisement from a austrailian couple who teaches their kids your language for a year. 1maPX

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the part-time job that you have advertised on local newspaper for teaching persian language to your kids. First, let me introduce myself. I am a post-graduate student on Monash University that I live two blocks far from your house. Hence, I think I could help ypur children to learn my mother-tounge language and scheduel our secessions as a part-time job. When I was in my homeland, I used to assist on persian litreture at my university; Consequekntly, I have imropved my teaching skills. Moreover, I have two little nice who I live with; So I could cope with kids as well. In addition, I can teach your family about delicious persian foods. I know some good recepies from my grandmother. Also, I can explain more about our contemporary novelists and poets that would be beneficial to raise general knowledgment about persian culture. On the other hand, I think I would be fit for the job due to my persiam background. However, as I mentioned before I am student here so, this part-time job will assist me on my expenditures. In fact, spending time with Austreralian family would help me to improve my English and get to know more of your culture as well. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Toktam Kouklan

Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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