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Motivation letter for scholarship application

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“The leader is one who, out of the clutter, brings simplicity … out of discord, harmony … and out of difficulty, opportunity. ” This great quote from the legendary big-thinker Albert Einstein captures the essence of leadership so well. Without leaders, our world can seem complex, combative, and frustrating. My interest in the course started from my childhood, as a child, I had always dreamt of working in an office as a successful business professional. So I started my educational journey in that direction and got an admission into study business education at the University of Delta State. During my internship the course of my internship, was where I got my first experience of working in a business environment and I enjoyed every minute of it as it was a dream come true for me. I got the opportunity to test the efficiency of my knowledge as well as apply them and learn even more. Pursuing master of science in business is for enhancing not only my knowledge of business, but also for my ability to solve problems, to think abstractly and to see the big picture, and to articulate ideas with clarity and precision. Studying business also will help me to develop analytical skills and the ability to work in a problem solving environment. Studying International business and economics provides an understanding of the rapidly changing global economy. It concentrates on explanations of the complexities of the business discipline in relationship to the theory of international trade and finance and the changing roles of international institutions (such as the World Trade Organization and the International Monetary Fund). Participating in this scholarship (The Stipendium Hungaricum Program) will give me a great opportunity to continue my study and actualize my goal. My intention is to learn new things. I intend to get benefit from experienced and international business professionals. If this scholarship is awarded to me, the chances of my successful career in business becomes more likely. This scholarship is likely to provide me opportunities to harness new prospects by gaining benefits from further education in a reputed institute. This scholarship will open new doors for me to get new experiences. I am interested in studying in Hungary because it is an area with historic urban centers, a picturesque landscape, and a flourishing culture. It is also a relatively safe country with a low rate of violent crime. Moreover, the Hungarian higher education has a considerable history and strong traditions with institutions operating for hundreds of years. Although I have never lived or studied abroad before, I love to travel and experience new cultures, and therefore, I’m looking for an opportunity to expand my horizons while doing something I love. I anticipate developing both personally and professionally from an international experienceAbove all else, I pride myself on my cultural sensitivity when I find myself in the company of others who do not share a similar background as mine In regard to my program choices, I have observed and finally chosen to study international business and economy for more comprehensive knowledge in business and management and leadership for a foundation for both tactical and strategic business decisions. Because of these program choices, MSc in Management and leadership in the University of Pécs is my first option. It is followed by my other options, those are MSc in International business and economy in Budapest Business School - University of Applied Sciences as the second choice. I will be grateful if I can become an awardee of Stipendium Hungaricum because it is a big help for me to achieve my goal in the future. Thank you for your consideration. I earnestly wait for your positive response. Yours Sincerely, Duku Remilekun Ejovwoke
“The leader is one who, out of the clutter, brings simplicity … out of discord, harmony … and out of difficulty,
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opportunity
. ”

This great quote from the legendary
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big
-thinker Albert Einstein captures the essence of leadership
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so
well. Without leaders, our world can seem complex, combative, and frustrating.

My interest in the course
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started
from my childhood, as a child, I had always dreamt of working in an office as a successful
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business
professional.
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So
I
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started
my educational journey in that direction and
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got
an admission into study
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business
education at the University of Delta State. During my internship the course of my internship, was where I
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got
my
first
experience of working in a
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business
environment and I enjoyed every minute of it as it was a dream
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come
true for me. I
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got
the
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opportunity
to
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test
the efficiency of my knowledge
as well
as apply them and learn even more.

Pursuing master of science in
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business
is for enhancing not
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only
my knowledge of
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business
,
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but
also
for my ability to solve problems, to
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think
abstractly
and to
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see
the
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big
picture, and to articulate
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ideas
with clarity and precision. Studying
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business
also
will
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help
me to develop analytical
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skills
and the ability to work in a problem solving environment. Studying
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International
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business
and economics provides an understanding of the
rapidly
changing global economy. It concentrates on explanations of the complexities of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
discipline in relationship to the theory of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
trade and finance and the changing roles of
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international
institutions (such as the World Trade Organization and the
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International
Monetary Fund).

Participating in this
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scholarship
(The
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
Program) will give me a great
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opportunity
to continue my study and actualize my goal. My intention is to learn
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new
things. I intend to
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get
benefit from experienced and
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international
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business
professionals. If this
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scholarship
is awarded
to me, the chances of my successful career in
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business
becomes more likely. This
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scholarship
is likely to provide me
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opportunities
to harness
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new
prospects by gaining benefits from
further
education in a reputed institute. This
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scholarship
will open
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new
doors for me to
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get
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new
experiences.

I
am interested
in studying in Hungary
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because
it is an area with historic urban centers, a picturesque landscape, and a flourishing culture. It is
also
a
relatively
safe country with a low rate of violent crime.
Moreover
, the Hungarian higher education has a considerable history and strong traditions with institutions operating for hundreds of years.

Although I have never
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lived
or studied abroad
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before
, I
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love
to travel and experience
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new
cultures, and
therefore
, I’m looking for an
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opportunity
to expand my horizons while doing something I
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love
. I anticipate developing both
personally
and
professionally
from an
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international
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experienceAbove
all else, I pride myself on my cultural sensitivity when I find myself in the
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company
of others who do not share a similar background as mine

In regard to my program choices, I have observed and
finally
chosen to study
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international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
and economy for more comprehensive knowledge in
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business
and management and leadership for a foundation for both tactical and strategic
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business
decisions.
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Because
of these program choices,
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.
MSc
in Management and leadership in the University of
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Pécs
is my
first
option. It
is followed
by my other options, those are
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.
MSc
in
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International
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business
and economy in Budapest
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Business
School
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-
University of Applied Sciences as the second choice.

I will be grateful if I can become an awardee of
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
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because
it is a
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big
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help
for me to achieve my goal in the future.

Thank you for your consideration.

I
earnestly
wait for your
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positive
response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Duku
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Remilekun
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Ejovwoke
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IELTS letter Motivation letter for scholarship application

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
616 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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