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You moved to a new country and you want to write to former colleagues tell him or her when did you go and what you are doing there Job describe your feeling invite your friends to come

You moved to a new country and you want to write to former colleagues tell him or her when did you go and what you are doing there Job describe your feeling invite your friends to come YmLrm
Dear raman, I hope you will be fine as you know I changed my job last month from here place in the light of the fact that I got a manager job in other company consequently I want to tell something about it in this letter. Let me interduce about my position, I moved in chandigarh because of my job as a i did not want to miss the boat it is well known company where I am doing a job as manager position the name of the company amazon I know heard name about the company. However, I really I like this work due to the fact of it was my dream job which I got apart from that I get well paid income from this position even I enjoy my work as a all environment of this place is immensely good as well as colleague of there has immensely helpful and kindhearted person. I want to invite my new company where I do work in know you really like this place please tell me when you free definitely visit here. I look forward to waiting from your answer Your sincerely.
Dear
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raman
,

I hope you will be fine as you know I
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changed
my
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job
last month from here place in the light of the fact that I
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got
a manager
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job
in other
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company
consequently
I want to
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tell
something about it in this letter.

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Let
me
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interduce
about my position, I
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moved
in
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chandigarh
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because
of my
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job
as
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a
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i
did not want to miss the boat it is well known
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company
where I am doing a
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job
as manager position the name of the
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company
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amazon
I know heard name about the
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company
.

However
, I
really
I like this work due to the fact of it was my dream
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job
which I
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got
apart from that I
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get
well paid income from this position even I enjoy my work as
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a
all environment of this place is
immensely
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good
as well
as colleague of there has
immensely
helpful and kindhearted person.

I want to invite my new
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company
where I do work in know you
really
like this place
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me when you free definitely visit here.

I look forward to waiting from your answer Your
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter You moved to a new country and you want to write to former colleagues tell him or her when did you go and what you are doing there Job describe your feeling invite your friends to come

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  American English
6 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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