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The diagram below shows the structure of solar panels and its use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the structure of solar panels and its use. 7paE2
The given illustration shows an diagramatic plan of how solar panel works and an effective way of converting the temperature of air and water using natural sun light using the sun rays. Solar panel consist of a panel with inlet section and outlet section along with a transparent glass over the panel which acts as a lid and helps in absorption of heat from the sun rays when pass through the glass screeen. Its is quiet evident from the diagram that air enters the inlet of the panel, while the glass screen absorbs the heat from the sun rays and helps in the changing the temperature of the air. As the air inside the panel warms, the warm air relases from the outlet of the panel. The solar panel works the similar way when used to warm water using natural sun rays and water to generate heat and warm the water in the panel.
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diagramatic
plan of how solar
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panel
works and an effective way of converting the temperature of
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air
and
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water
using natural
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sun
light using the
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sun
rays.

Solar
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panel
consist of a
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panel
with inlet section and outlet section along with a transparent glass over the
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panel
which acts as a lid and
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helps
in absorption of heat from the
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sun
rays when pass through the glass
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screeen
.

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evident from the diagram that
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air
enters the inlet of the
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panel
, while the glass screen absorbs the heat from the
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sun
rays and
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helps
in the changing the temperature of the
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air
. As the
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air
inside the
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panel
warms, the
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warm
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air
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relases
from the outlet of the panel.

The solar
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panel
works the similar way when
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used
to
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warm
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water
using natural
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sun
rays and
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water
to generate heat and
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warm
the
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water
in the
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panel
.

IELTS letter The diagram below shows the structure of solar panels and its use.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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