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The diagram below shows the structure of solar panels and its use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the structure of solar panels and its use. 7paE2
The given illustration shows an diagramatic plan of how solar panel works and an effective way of converting the temperature of air and water using natural sun light using the sun rays. Solar panel consist of a panel with inlet section and outlet section along with a transparent glass over the panel which acts as a lid and helps in absorption of heat from the sun rays when pass through the glass screeen. Its is quiet evident from the diagram that air enters the inlet of the panel, while the glass screen absorbs the heat from the sun rays and helps in the changing the temperature of the air. As the air inside the panel warms, the warm air relases from the outlet of the panel. The solar panel works the similar way when used to warm water using natural sun rays and water to generate heat and warm the water in the panel.
The
given
illustration
shows
an
diagramatic
plan of how solar
panel
works and an effective way of converting the temperature of
air
and
water
using natural
sun
light using the
sun
rays.

Solar
panel
consist of a
panel
with inlet section and outlet section along with a transparent glass over the
panel
which acts as a lid and
helps
in absorption of heat from the
sun
rays when pass through the glass
screeen
.

Its is
quiet
evident from the diagram that
air
enters the inlet of the
panel
, while the glass screen absorbs the heat from the
sun
rays and
helps
in the changing the temperature of the
air
. As the
air
inside the
panel
warms, the
warm
air
relases
from the outlet of the panel.

The solar
panel
works the similar way when
used
to
warm
water
using natural
sun
rays and
water
to generate heat and
warm
the
water
in the
panel
.
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IELTS letter The diagram below shows the structure of solar panels and its use.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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