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Your friend wants to choose a short course at a training centre in Canada, and you have just finished this course. He or she wants you to give some advice. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should Describe what you have done in the course(content of the course) Why you recommend course Your benefit from this course

Your friend wants to choose a short course at a training centre in Canada, and you have just finished this course. He or she wants you to give some advice. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should Describe what you have done in the course(content of the course) Why you recommend course Your benefit from this course G6wB

Dear Sue, I’m very glad to hear that you want to choose a baking course at a training centre in Canada. I have just finished this course at the New East Cuisine School. Let me share what I have learnt from the experience, and maybe it can be helpful to you. In fact, the New East Cuisine School is very famous in Canada, and I did gain a lot from it. The course included both theoretical knowledge and practical operation. I have learnt how to make salads and desserts such as cookies, pies, and mousse cakes. My biggest gain is that my decorating skills have been greatly improved. I would like to suggest that you choose the course I took. The teachers there were so patient, and the small class teaching ensured that every student could be taken care of. Now I can show off my baking skills at parties and my children are more willing to be with me because they want to learn baking too! I trust that you can also benefit much from this course. Speak Soon Mia

Dear Sue,

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course
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 patient, and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
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 teaching ensured that every student could be taken
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 benefit much from this course.

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Mia