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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. dRkd
Dear David, Hello, Hope you're doing well? hope this letter finds you well. I was just pleased I got your confirmation letter that you are coming to take care of my home and my Snoober(pet). Thank you so much for this support I was totally confused and pressed about this situation which you solved. Now I will happily attend my meeting which is on 25/05/2021. I am going for a week from 20/05/2021 till 28/05/2021. I taking this much time because of it is held in UK as you which takes approximately 2 days in traveling. So, I will make sure about your convenience. You don't need to worry about food which I have already ordered our favourite restaurant for a week they will deliver at your doorstep. Coming to our adorable pet snooper, the main thing which you need to do is give it a bath twice in week, feed him on time and take it on a walk. So, this of pet belonging timetable i've kept reminder in smartwatch. Furthermore, Make sure plants in the balcony should be hydrated so don't forget to give water to plant in the morning 9. 00am. For you my lovely friend, i subscribed to your favorite channel and games. Hope enjoyed and you don't feel bored at my home. See you soonRgards, Kouser.
Dear David, Hello, Hope you're doing well?
hope
this letter finds you well. I was
just
pleased
I
got
your confirmation letter that you are coming to take care of my home and my
Snoober
(pet). Thank you
so
much for this support I was
totally
confused and pressed about this situation which you solved.
Now
I will
happily
attend my meeting which is on 25/05/2021. I am going for a week
from 20/05
/2021 till 28/05/2021.
I taking
this much time
because
of it
is held
in UK as you which takes approximately 2 days in traveling.
So
, I will
make
sure about your convenience. You don't need to worry about food which I have already ordered our
favourite
restaurant for a week they will deliver at your doorstep. Coming to our adorable pet snooper, the main thing which you need to do is give it a bath twice in week, feed him on time and take it on a walk.
So
, this of pet belonging timetable
i've
kept
reminder in smartwatch.
Furthermore
,
Make
sure plants in the balcony should
be hydrated
so
don't forget to give water to plant in the morning 9. 00am. For you my lovely friend,
i
subscribed to your favorite channel and games. Hope enjoyed and you don't feel bored at my home.

See
you
soonRgards
,
Kouser
.
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
221 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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