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You are planning a two week vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away.

You are planning a two week vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. naEe
Dear Meera, I hope you are fine and healthy. I want a big favour from you. As next saturday I am going for fifteen days vacation, it is long time to leave my house alone. I know you would take care of my house. Tasks is very simple that you have to do, Already i appointed a decent servant on temporary basis. He will do every kind of works like watering in garden, dusting and household stuff. But more important is that on tuesday my essential documents would be coming by post, Could you please collect it and put it safely in my cupboards. This days you have to keep eye on my house that everythings will going good and servant will doing his work or not. If anything happened wrong then please text me at any time. I would be happy to pay a small amount of money in exchange for your help. Please let me know if you will be able to help me out. I would like to hearing your positive response. Thank you very much for your kindness. Your Neighbour, Shivani
Dear
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Meera
, I hope you are fine and healthy. I want a
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big
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favour
from you. As
next
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saturday
I am going for fifteen days vacation, it is long time to
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leave
my
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house
alone. I know you would take care of my
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house
. Tasks is
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very
simple that you
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have to
do, Already
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
appointed a decent servant on temporary basis. He will do every kind of works like watering in garden, dusting and household stuff.
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But
more
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important
is that on
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tuesday
my essential documents would be coming by post, Could you
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please
collect it and put it
safely
in my cupboards.
It seems that a possessive apostrophe is missing.
This days
you
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have to
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keep
eye on my
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house
that
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everythings will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
going
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good
and servant will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "do"
doing
his work or not. If anything happened
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wrong
then
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please
text me at any time. I would be happy to pay a
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small
amount of money in exchange for your
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help
.
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Please
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let
me know if you will be able to
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help
me out. I would like to hearing your
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positive
response. Thank you
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very
much for your kindness. Your
Possible spelling mistake. 'Neighbour' is British English.
Neighbour
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Shivani

IELTS letter You are planning a two week vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away.

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1 paragraphs
184 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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