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You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months,and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Describe the type of accommodation you would like Explain what facilities you will need nearby

You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Describe the type of accommodation you would like Explain what facilities you will need nearby 72Lb

Dear Sir or madam, I would like to inquiry about renting a place for three months. My name is Nilam Chauhan and I am moving to London for some project work. Thus, I require to rent a place. First of all, I do not have any mode of transportation with me. Therefore, I am looking for a place near to bus station or tube station. Also, for somedays I might be working from home. Hence, good internet must be required. Small house or flat would be fine as I will not be cooking in home. I enjoyed shopping a lot and I prefer to leave where shops are easily accessiable. I am also looking for information regarding any event in these three month. I hope given information suffice to find a place for me. Looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Nilam Chauhan

Dear Sir or madam,

I would like to inquiry about renting a place for three months. My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Ni lamNil am
Nilam
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Chauhan, and
Chauhan and
 I am moving to London for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 project work. Thus
, I require to rent a place.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I do not have any mode of transportation with me. Therefore
, I am looking for a place near to bus station or tube station. Also
, for Possible spelling mistake found.somedaysomewayssome days
somedays
 I might be working from home. Hence
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be required
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
Small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 or flat would be fine as I will not be cooking in home.

I enjoyed shopping a lot and I prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 where shops are easily
Possible spelling mistake found.accessible
accessiable
. I am also
 looking for information regarding any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 in these three month.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 information suffice to find a place for me. Looking forward for your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Ni lamNil am
Nilam
 Chauhan

IELTS letter You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Describe the type of accommodation you would like Explain what facilities you will need nearby

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

142 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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