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You are assigned to give a presentation at a forum, but you have to be absent for a couple of days. Write a letter to your colleague and ask him/her to help you give a speech. In your letter, you should Say why you are leaving Explain why you want him/her to give a presentation Tell him/her what he/she should say in the presentation

You are assigned to give a presentation at a forum, but you have to be absent for a couple of days. Write a letter to your colleague and ask him/her to help you give a speech. In your letter, you should Say why you are leaving Explain why you want him/her to give a presentation Tell him/her what he/she should say in the presentation qj5r
Dear Susan, I am writing to ask you to help me give a speech this Friday April 3, 2021. You know, I will take three days off work from tomorrow, because something urgent happened with my family. I will not come back to the company until next Monday. In deed, two weeks ago, our manage Mr. White arranged me to participate in the Work-Life Balance forum and I am honoured to have an opportunity to talk about my own experience. Now I have to be absent, so I hope you could take my place. I know you were the Employee of the Year in 2020, and also a supermom and a surfing master. I am sure the audiences will be very interested when you say some thing about these. I will be deeply grateful if you are able to help. Please let me know as soon as possible. Best regards, Mia Smith
Dear Susan,

I am writing to ask you to
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help
me give a speech this
Commas set off the month in a weekday-month-day date: "Friday,".
Friday
April 3, 2021. You know, I will take three days off work from tomorrow,
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because
something urgent happened with my family. I will not
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come
back to the
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company
until
next
Monday.

In deed, two weeks ago, our manage Mr. White arranged me to participate in the Work-Life Balance
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
forum and
I am
Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.
honoured
to have an opportunity to talk about my
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own
experience.
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Now
I
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have to
be absent,
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so
I hope you could take my place.

I know you were the Employee of the Year in 2020, and
also
a supermom and a surfing master. I am sure the audiences will be
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very
interested when you say
Did you mean "something"?
some thing
about these.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will be
deeply
grateful if you are able to
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help
.
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Please
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let
me know as
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soon
as possible.

Best regards,

Mia Smith
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IELTS letter You are assigned to give a presentation at a forum, but you have to be absent for a couple of days. Write a letter to your colleague and ask him/her to help you give a speech. In your letter, you should Say why you are leaving Explain why you want him/her to give a presentation Tell him/her what he/she should say in the presentation

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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