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write a letter to a friend telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words

write a letter to a friend telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words G6Jg

Dear Sally, How've you been since we last spoke? I am writing to let you know that I seem to have lost my hello kitty bag. I last recall having it with me on the weekend I spent at your place. Have you by any chance come across it? There's not much in it, to be honest. It should contain a black purse, my spare flat keys and a pair of designer sunglasses. Could you please check if I left it there? In the missing purse should be my bank cards and so I really need them back. I'd like to know if it really is lost so that I can go ahead and cancel my cards and then have them replaced. Please let me know. Your friend, Tammy.

Dear Sally,

How've you Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "was", "were"?waswere
been
 since we last spoke? I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I seem to have lost my hello kitty bag. Did you mean "If" or is a comma missing ("I,")?IfI,
I
 last recall having it with me on the weekend I spent at your place. Have you by any chance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across it?

There's not much in it, to be honest. It should contain a black purse, my spare flat keys and a pair of designer sunglasses.

Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 it there? In the missing purse should be my bank Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).cards, and
cards and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I really
 need them back. I'd like to know if it really
is lost
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can go ahead and cancel my cards and then have them replaced.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know.

Your friend,

Tammy. 

IELTS letter write a letter to a friend telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

129 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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