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write a letter to a friend telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words

write a letter to a friend telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words G6Jg
Dear Sally, How've you been since we last spoke? I am writing to let you know that I seem to have lost my hello kitty bag. I last recall having it with me on the weekend I spent at your place. Have you by any chance come across it? There's not much in it, to be honest. It should contain a black purse, my spare flat keys and a pair of designer sunglasses. Could you please check if I left it there? In the missing purse should be my bank cards and so I really need them back. I'd like to know if it really is lost so that I can go ahead and cancel my cards and then have them replaced. Please let me know. Your friend, Tammy.
Dear Sally,

How've you
Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "was", "were"?
been
since we last spoke? I am writing to
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let
you know that I seem to have lost my hello kitty bag.
Did you mean "If" or is a comma missing ("I,")?
I
last recall having it with me on the weekend I spent at your place. Have you by any chance
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come
across it?

There's not much in it, to be honest. It should contain a black purse, my spare flat keys and a pair of designer sunglasses.

Could you
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please
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check
if I
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left
it there? In the missing purse should be my bank
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
cards and
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so
I
really
need them back. I'd like to know if it
really
is lost
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so
that I can go ahead and cancel my cards and then have them replaced.

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Please
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let
me know.

Your friend,

Tammy.
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IELTS letter write a letter to a friend telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words

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  American English
7 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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