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Your friend wants some advice on what she should take with her on her first trip abroad.

Your friend wants some advice on what she should take with her on her first trip abroad. XEaGO
Dear Richard. I am writing in reply in your letter asking for advice about your first trip abroad. First of all you should learn foreign language. If you know, you will speak a person who comes another country or one who acknowledges a lingo. Secondly, you should select a good accomplice. In light of the fact that you are not bored with a specious partner. If he or she knows about the country in which you are going to go to trip, it will be really nice. Thirdly, when you are travelling, you should be too calm. This is supremely important in the name of your health. Remember that always have fun. Enjoy all the time. My dad every time tell me that if you go to a trip or go on holiday, you will be ready everything. And now I am going to advise this to you. I would extremely much like to know if this is helpful. Your sincerely. Sarah Edison.
Dear Richard. I am writing in reply in your letter asking for advice about your
first
trip abroad.
First of all
you should learn foreign language. If you know, you will speak a person who
comes
another country or one who acknowledges a lingo.
Secondly
, you should select a
good
accomplice. In light of the fact that you are not bored with a specious partner. If he or she knows about the country in which you are going to go to trip, it will be
really
nice.
Thirdly
, when you are travelling, you should be too calm. This is
supremely
important
in the name of your health. Remember that always have fun. Enjoy all the time. My dad every time
tell
me that if you
go to a trip
or go on holiday, you will be ready everything. And
now
I am going to advise this to you. I would
extremely
much like to know if this is helpful. Your
sincerely
. Sarah Edison.
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IELTS letter Your friend wants some advice on what she should take with her on her first trip abroad.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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