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As part of your study you have worked for a short period of time in a company. write a letter to the manager of this company. In your letter: 1. Thank he/she for the opportunity. 2. Explain how the experience gained there has helped you 3. Share your plan for the future

As part of your study you have worked for a short period of time in a company. write a letter to the manager of this company. In your letter: 1. Thank he/she for the opportunity. 2. Explain how the experience gained there has helped you 3. Share your plan for the future gGp0g

Dear Aayush, I am writing this letter to express my feelings for you and your organization. i had spend a great time in this institution and i learnt a lot of things and thankyou for giving me this opportunity to work with you. Moreover, I joined as an trainee business analyst and promoted on as an executive of business analyst. I worked on a plethora of software and different projects, so i gained many knowledge and techniques it was helpful in may future studies. I am going to enrolled myself in Texas university in U. S for PG diploma course in data science. Hopefully, I will be graduated in the end of this academic year. I am sure that this course is beneficial for our company to increase the sales and market share. I would like to request you to consider me for future vacancy in your company after 11 month. I thoroughly enjoyed my time with in your company and I will be interested to joining you again as a full time employee. Once again thankyou so much for giving me this opportunity, it is extremely useful for me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. your sincerely Vaishnavi Marwaha

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.Aarush
Aayush
, I am writing this letter to express my feelings for you and your organization. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 a great time in this institution and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 things and Possible spelling mistake found.thank you
thankyou
 for giving me this opportunity to work with you.

Moreover
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 as Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 trainee business analyst and promoted on as an executive of business analyst. I worked on a plethora of software and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 projects, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 gained Use "much" or "little" with uncountable nouns.muchlittle
many
 knowledge and techniques it was helpful in The month "May" needs to be capitalized.May
may
 future studies.

I am going to 'Going to' requires the base form: "enrol", "enroll"enrolenroll
enrolled
 myself in Texas university in U. S for PG diploma course in data science. Hopefully
, I will be graduated
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this academic year. I am sure that this course is beneficial for our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to increase the sales and market share. I would like to request you to consider me for future vacancy in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 after 11 Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
thoroughly
 enjoyed my time with in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and I will be interested
 to joining you again as a full time employee.

Once again Possible spelling mistake found.thank you
thankyou
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for giving me this opportunity, it is extremely
 useful for me. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYour
your
sincerely


Possible spelling mistake found.
Vaishnavi
Possible spelling mistake found.MarthaMarathaMarianaMarshaMarmaraMarsala
Marwaha