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you have recently moved to overseas and asked a shipping company to send your furniture and some possessions, but some of them have got damaged. write a letter to the shipping company's manager. explain where and when the items were sent. explain what has caused to the furniture. what do you like the company to do for you?

you have recently moved to overseas and asked a shipping company to send your furniture and some possessions, but some of them have got damaged. write a letter to the shipping company's manager. explain where and when the items were sent. explain what has caused to the furniture. what do you like the company to do for you? Q2y5P
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing in connection with my furniture that moved from Iran to Canada, Toronto with your shipping company. I must let you know 2 weeks ago on 20th February I asked your company to get help, for my movement. You promised me that all my furniture be at safe. However, when I arrived to destination and saw my tools I got angry because some of them had broken and my memorable table got bad damaged. I expected your company to care my equipment and take their responsible as good as possible. Unfortunately, was a bad experience movement for me and I want a reasonable reply from your stuff. I would like to ask you if it is possible, return half of my payment because I am not satisfaction with your employees function. Thank you in advance for your help. sincerely,
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing in connection with my furniture that
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moved
from Iran to Canada, Toronto with your shipping
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company
. I
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must
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let
you know 2 weeks ago on 20th February I asked your
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company
to
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get
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help
, for my movement. You promised me that all my furniture be at safe.
However
, when I arrived to destination and
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saw
my tools I
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got
angry
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because
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some
of them had broken and my memorable table
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got
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bad
damaged. I
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expected
your
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company
to care my equipment and take their responsible as
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good
as possible. Unfortunately, was a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
experience movement for me and I want a reasonable reply from your stuff. I would like to ask you if it is possible, return half of my payment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am not satisfaction with your employees function. Thank you in advance for your
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help
.
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sincerely
,
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IELTS letter you have recently moved to overseas and asked a shipping company to send your furniture and some possessions, but some of them have got damaged. write a letter to the shipping company's manager. explain where and when the items were sent. explain what has caused to the furniture. what do you like the company to do for you?

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  American English
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144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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