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you want something that you can't buy in your own country. you decide to ask an english friend to help you Write a letter to this friend

you want something that you can't buy in your own country. you decide to ask an english friend to help you Write a letter to this friend Mlnx6

Dear John, Hello, I am writing this letter to you because i need your support. I required one laptop dell company and model number is INSPPIRON 15 3000 Series and core 15. This model is useful to my design purpose. In this model graphics card and memory high standard. This model is recently launched in your country and this model is not available in our country. Last month, i completed my degree course in mechanical field and now I have opportunity to work in multinational company as a design engineer. I shall planning to bought this laptop because it is useful in my work improve my abilities. Also my design software is very high graphics ranges and required high memory rise laptop. So this laptop is fulfil my criteria. I know you will be coming in our country next month. If available this laptop in your country so if possible to buy this laptop so I paid whole amount of this laptop in advanced via online mod. I will be very thankful to you for your help. Your sincerely Sarthak shah

Dear John,

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 thankful to you for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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Your sincerely


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