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Letter to the ambassador of the republic of Korea

Letter to the ambassador of the republic of Korea rY2yp
Dear Colleague Kim Dong Hoon, I cordially congratulate you on the national holiday of the Republic of Korea - Independence Day. This Day symbolizes the struggle of the Korean people for their freedom and independence. It's not for nothing that you call this holiday 광복절? , 光復 節 - "the holiday of the return of the light. " It is also symbolic that truly broad political, economic, humanitarian ties between the Republic of Uzbekistan and the Republic of Korea began to develop after our country achieved independence. Today, Uzbekistan is an important partner of the Republic of Korea in the Central Asian region within the framework of a new policy aimed at ensuring security and deepening multifaceted activities in the Eurasian space. It is very gratifying that in achieving these successes an important role belongs to the journalists of our countries, who are making their worthy contribution to familiarizing our peoples with the successes of the two friendly countries in all spheres. A memorandum was signed between our professional associations, which raised our cooperation to a new level. We remember the friendly visit of journalists from the Republic of Korea to Uzbekistan in 2019. In turn, a delegation of Uzbek journalists is currently preparing for a trip to your beautiful country, the press of which regularly publishes materials about New Uzbekistan. I wish you, dear Kim Dong Hoon, and in your person all the journalists of the Republic of Korea, further success in your professional activities, prosperity to your families and loved ones.
Dear Colleague Kim Dong
Hoon
,

I
cordially
congratulate you on the national holiday of the Republic of Korea
-
Independence Day. This Day symbolizes the struggle of the Korean
people
for their freedom and independence. It's not for nothing that you call this holiday
광복절
?
,
光復
-
"
the holiday of the return of the light.
"


It is
also
symbolic that
truly
broad political, economic, humanitarian ties between the Republic of Uzbekistan and the Republic of Korea began to develop after our
country
achieved independence.
Today
, Uzbekistan is an
important
partner of the Republic of Korea in the Central Asian region within the framework of a new policy aimed at ensuring security and deepening multifaceted activities in the Eurasian space.

It is
very
gratifying that in achieving these successes an
important
role belongs to the
journalists
of our
countries
, who are making their worthy contribution to familiarizing our peoples with the successes of the two friendly
countries
in all spheres. A memorandum
was signed
between our professional associations, which raised our cooperation to a new level. We remember the friendly visit of
journalists
from the Republic of Korea to Uzbekistan in 2019. In turn, a delegation of Uzbek
journalists
is
currently
preparing for a trip to your
beautiful
country
, the press of which
regularly
publishes materials about New Uzbekistan.

I wish you, dear Kim Dong
Hoon
, and in your person all the
journalists
of the Republic of Korea,
further
success in your professional activities, prosperity to your families and
loved
ones.
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IELTS letter Letter to the ambassador of the republic of Korea

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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