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What I love about my boyfriend

What I love about my boyfriend j5Yn8
Hi, diary! Today I’m gonna talk about with you about my boyfriend. We’ve got to know each other almost end of the October 2020. If I were in that time now, I would never say that he will be my boyfriend and we will have a great time together. It has passed 9 months since that day and it feels like a month. During this period, we’ve known each other more closely and always supported each other no matter what happened or no matter what problems we’ve faced. Let me talk about him a bit. How was he located at the center of my life? How did he become my irreplaceable one? How did I love him? I cannot say the exact date when I fell in love with him, but you know you can feel it through your heart. The voice in you can tell that “yes, it IS the right person for you”. I wasn’t aware of the flow of the period; when I realize we’ve been talking for hours till the morning in each single day. What I love in him is his passion and the way of looking everything as real. He taught me so many things unconsciously. I learned to live the moment, not to look past and future, just today. I learned to control my anger (I’m not sure how much I can) and sometimes take first step in order to make it up stuffs. There were some days I felt lonely and wanted to be with myself; in this situation he understood me and respected to my decision. When I quarreled with my mom, he calmed me and listened to all my concerns. He cared me more than himself and never took his attention from me. Sometimes we argued, but our foundation didn’t let to take apart from ourselves. We always came back to each other and healed our injuries or pain together. He is such a person that cares others a lot and tries to help them in any case. He has a merciful heart and I will do everything I can to protect his heart from others. I feel myself in Heaven with him; dear diary, you cannot imagine how peaceful he is. I trust and believe in him in any case and I’m proud of my man! <3 It is all about I can say far. See you soon now.
Hi, diary!

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that “yes, it IS the right person for you”. I wasn’t aware of the flow of the period; when I realize we’ve been talking for hours till the morning in each single day. What I
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it up stuffs. There were
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days I felt lonely and wanted to be with myself; in this situation he understood me and respected to my decision. When I quarreled with my mom, he calmed me and listened to all my concerns. He cared me more than himself and never took his attention from me.
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our foundation didn’t
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and healed our injuries or pain together. He is such a person that cares others a lot and tries to
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them in any case. He has a merciful heart and I will do everything I can to protect his heart from others. I feel myself in Heaven with him; dear diary, you cannot imagine how peaceful he is. I trust and believe in him in any case and I’m proud of my
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