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Your friend want to know about some local places to visit in your town. Write him an email.

Your friend want to know about some local places to visit in your town. Write him an email. OV6KN

Hi John, Hope you are doing good. So excited am I that you are coming to my home-town! We should definitely catch up. It feels like I haven't seen you for ages. Before you plan your whole trip, I want to suggest you a couple of cool places to visit. As I’ve been living here for the last 25 years, I would like you to explore the best places in the city. However, some of them are known only to locals, so there might very little information about them online. First of all, I would suggest to start your tour at Granville Island. An amazing brewery is right in the middle of the island, you won’t miss it. Delicious food and more than twenty types of beer are served there. You may also purchase a beer there and take it home as a souvenir. Another thing that I would like to introduce to you is the Science World. I haven’t seen anything like that in the fifteen countries that I've been to. Explanation of science material is in an easy and understandable for everybody way. I really hope that you will enjoy my tips. If you have any questions, please let me know, I would be more than happy to help you. Also, if you have any spare couple hours I would be down to spend some time with you! Best wishes, Diana

Hi John,

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Best wishes,

Diana