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Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: • recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: • recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals. Nrweb
Dear Rajeev, I hope this letter finds you well. I had received your letter yesterday, and it is always great to hear from you. I am thrilled to know that you are planning to visit my country. India is an amazing country, and there is a myriad of opportunities available here. If I had to suggest a city, I would advise you to try New Delhi. This place is the capital, and the top metropolitan and advanced city in India. There are tons of opportunities in that city, and many of my friends and family members residing there. For work, I would suggest the All India Institute of Medical Science. It is the most prestigious and esteem university in India. There are various job opportunities in this institute such as hospital management or office administration. Additionally, the salary is decent, but the experience is even better. So I would strongly recommend applying to this company. I would also suggest that you should contact any other friends, who reside in Delhi. The reason being that they would provide you with information about various job offers currently available, and also help you with accommodation, and living expenses. I hope this would be useful information. Please feel free to contact me if there are any more queries, I shall be happy to help. All the best for your future endeavours, and give my regards to uncle and aunty. Take care. Best wishes, Shakib
Dear Rajeev,

I hope this letter finds you well. I had received your letter yesterday, and it is always great to hear from you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am thrilled
to know that you are planning to visit my country. India is an amazing country, and there is a myriad of opportunities available here. If I had to suggest a city, I would advise you to try New Delhi. This place is the capital, and the top metropolitan and advanced city in India.

There are tons of opportunities in that city, and
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many
of my friends and family members residing there. For work, I would suggest
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the All
India Institute of Medical Science. It is the most prestigious and esteem university in India. There are various job opportunities in this institute such as hospital management or office administration.
Additionally
, the salary is decent,
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but
the experience is even better.
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So
I would
strongly
recommend applying to this
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company
.

I would
also
suggest that you should contact any other friends, who reside in Delhi. The reason being that they would provide you with information about various job offers
currently
available, and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with accommodation, and living expenses. I hope this would be useful information.
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Please
feel free to contact me if there are any more queries, I shall be happy to
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help
. All the best for your future
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endeavours
, and give my regards to uncle and aunty.

Take care.

Best wishes,

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Shakib
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: • recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

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7 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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