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You have been facing a problem with your neighbour. Explain the problem, how long has it been a problem and what your neighbour should do about it.

You have been facing a problem with your neighbour. Explain the problem, how long has it been a problem and what your neighbour should do about it. JoV1k
Dear Henry, I am writing this letter to discuss a persisting problem I have been facing owing to your vehicle parking habits. Yesterday I noticed your SUV parked right in front of my home's main door. I have come to realise that this is not a one-off incident and, in fact, has been the case for a month now. In addition, your car was parked in a way that prevented more than one person from entering at the same time. Not only does this make it difficult for anyone to enter, but also makes exiting the home considerably problematic. The person impacted the most by this persisting problem is my mother who, as you already know, requires an electronic wheelchair for mobility. While there are several other locations to park your vehicle, I see far greater value in seeking a permanent solution. Therefore, I urge you to build a garage for yourself. Although I believe it's your responsibility to finance a garage, I will be happy to meet you half-way. Typically, constructing a garage takes close to a week. Nevertheless, I will allow you a month to bring this issue to closure. This is, most definitely, in the best of both our interests. To sum it all, we ought to be considerate about each other as neighbours and work towards improving each other's stay at Nashville. Regards, Sanket
Dear Henry,

I am writing this letter to discuss a persisting problem I have been facing owing to your vehicle parking habits.

Yesterday I noticed your SUV parked right in front of my home's main door. I have
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come
to
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realise
that this is not a one-off incident and, in fact, has been the case for a month
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now
.
In addition
, your car
was parked
in a way that
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prevented
more than one person from entering at the same time. Not
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only
does this
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make
it difficult for anyone to enter,
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but
also
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makes
exiting the home
considerably
problematic. The person impacted the most by this persisting problem is my mother who, as you already know, requires an electronic wheelchair for mobility. While there are several other locations to park your vehicle, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
far greater value in seeking a permanent solution.
Therefore
, I urge you to build a garage for yourself. Although I believe it's your responsibility to finance a garage, I will be happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you half-way.

Typically
, constructing a garage takes close to a week.
Nevertheless
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
you a month to bring this issue to closure. This is, most definitely, in the best of both our interests.

To sum it all, we ought to be considerate about each other as
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neighbours
and work towards improving each other's stay at Nashville.

Regards,

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Sanket
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IELTS letter You have been facing a problem with your neighbour. Explain the problem, how long has it been a problem and what your neighbour should do about it.

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