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Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment. Apologise for not messaging Explain why you could not go Suggest another date

Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment. Apologise for not messaging Explain why you could not go Suggest another date e5ExA
Dear Rose, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my sincere apology for not showing up at the meeting, which you have organized for us on 6 June. To begin with, I was extremely excited about our get together; unfortunately, I could not meet you on that special date due to some physical injury. Besides, I get to know that you have been there for the whole day waiting for me, and I felt guilty for not updating you by a text message about the incident. As you know, before I left from my home, I had texted you that I’m on my way, but later I had met with an accident on the highway and my car has been completely crashed even I lost my cell phone and I went into an unconscious mind after the big hit with another car. In addition to this, rescue people came and taken me to the hospital as soon as I wake up I was searching for my phone to give a call to you, while I could not find and make you wait for me. Hence, I would like to set up another meeting with you on 28 June, I hope this time I can meet you if you can attend the meeting on the same date. If you have any inconvenience, please let me know. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John
Dear Rose,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my sincere apology for not showing up at the meeting, which you have organized for us on 6 June.

To
begin
with, I was
extremely
excited about our
get
together; unfortunately, I could not
meet
you on that special date due to
some
physical injury.
Besides
, I
get
to know that you have been there for the whole day waiting for me, and I felt
guilty for
not updating you by a text message about the incident. As you know,
before
I
left
from my home, I had texted you that I’m on my way,
but
later I had met with an accident on the highway and my car has been completely crashed even I lost my cell phone and I went into an unconscious mind after the
big
hit with another car.
In addition
to this, rescue
people
came and taken me to the hospital as
soon
as I wake up I was searching for my phone to give a call to you, while I could not find and
make
you wait for me.

Hence
, I would like to set up another meeting with you on 28 June, I hope this time I can
meet
you if you can attend the meeting on the same date. If you have any inconvenience,
please
let
me know.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

John
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment. Apologise for not messaging Explain why you could not go Suggest another date

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
237 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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