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Your friend delivered a baby girl. Congratulate her on this good news and write how you feel. In your letter, explain your situation about your inability to come and see her in person. In your letter: Say how happy you are on this news Explain your situation that you could not attend this important occasion What gifts you have brought for her

Your friend delivered a baby girl. Congratulate her on this good news and write how you feel. In your letter, explain your situation about your inability to come and see her in person. In your letter: Say how happy you are on this news Explain your situation that you could not attend this important occasion What gifts you have brought for her m1XnK

Dear Mary, How are you? Hope you are having an amazing time now with having been gifted with a little princess. I'm enormously elated after having heard this news from your husband and I really wanted to turn up there; however, my boss has tasked me an important assignment that needs to be delivered within the next two days. This has been the best news to me since the recent months and you really cannot imagine how I rejoice despite my hectic work schedule. I immediately told this to my wife and she is extremely eager to see you. As I stated, the task that was assigned takes up a large sum of my daily time and it is crucial that I complete it within the stipulated time. We will leave our town in the next two days to see you after having completed this work. You may know that I'm not quite good at buying presents especially for infants and hence my wife has bought a baby care kit that contains essentials such as baby soap, a delicate towel, and importantly a swinging baby cradle. We imagine that your little princess will love what we bought for her. And don't worry, I'm getting your favourite chocolate, Ferrero Rocher, from my town, which you have been asking me for so long. Do call me on my number or write an email if I should buy anything else for you. See you soon! Love Jay

Dear Mary,

How are you? Hope you are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenjoyincludegetreceiveacquirebear
having
 an amazing time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenjoyincludegetreceiveacquirebear
having
been gifted
 with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 princess. I'm enormously
 elated after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenjoyincludegetreceiveacquirebear
having
 heard this news from your husband and I really
 wanted to turn up there; however
, my boss has tasked me an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 assignment that needs to be delivered
 within the next
 two days.

This has been the best news to me since the recent months and you really
 cannot imagine how I rejoice despite my hectic work schedule. I immediately This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 this to my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).wife, and
wife and
 she is extremely
 eager to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

As I stated, the task that was assigned
 takes up a large sum of my daily time and it is crucial that I complete it within the stipulated time. We will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 our town in the next
 two days to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenjoyincludegetreceiveacquirebear
having
 completed this work.

You may know that I'm not quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at buying presents especially
 for infants and hence
 my wife has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a baby care kit that contains essentials such as baby soap, a delicate towel, and importantly
 a swinging baby cradle. We imagine that your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 princess will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 what we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 for her. And don't worry, I'm getting your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 chocolate, Possible spelling mistake found.Ferraro
Ferrero
Possible spelling mistake found.RicherRockerRocheOcherR ocherRoche r
Rocher
, from my town, which you have been asking me for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long.

Do call me on my number or write an email if I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 anything else for you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


Jay