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your friend stayed in your home for the holiday trip,thank them for staying with you,which part of the trip you liked the most,sending the photos along with the letter

your friend stayed in your home for the holiday trip, thank them for staying with you, which part of the trip you liked the most, sending the photos along with the letter ldRgD

Hi Gopi, Hope you are doing well. i am writing to thank you for staying with us in our home for the holiday trip. This holiday trip was wonderful with lots of fun and enjoyment. It was a memorable week with lots of activities like camping, hiking along with the campfire and grilling. The part I enjoyed the most is the camping in the Tunnel mountain on top of the hills with the campfire. Hiking in johnston canyon to the upper falls and the ink pots was simply amazing and the view of the water falls as so wonderful. The scenic drive to lake louise and the view from the agnes tea house lookout was mesmerising and beautiful. I have attached the photos taken during our trip along with this letter to store and cherish the memories. Let me know if you need copies of any other pictures that we have taken during our trip. yours lovingly, Sivarajan

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 am writing to thank you for staying with us in our home for the holiday trip.

This holiday trip was wonderful with lots of fun and enjoyment. It was a memorable week with lots of activities like camping, hiking along with the campfire and grilling.

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mesmerising
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beautiful
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I have attached the photos taken during our trip along with this letter to store and cherish the memories.

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Let
 me know if you need copies of any other pictures that we have taken during our trip.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
lovingly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sivarajan

IELTS letter your friend stayed in your home for the holiday trip, thank them for staying with you, which part of the trip you liked the most, sending the photos along with the letter

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American English

8 paragraphs

157 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0

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