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Hello! I would like to ask some questions about the university.

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Hello! I would like to ask some questions about the university. - I have noticed on the university website that the university is going to launch an English-speaking faculty of medicine, is it going to be available in the year 2022 - 2023? - Is there any scholarships for Moroccans who live abroad to be more specific in the Arabian Gulf. If not, How much does it cost to get into the university and does it include the accommodation? - Is taking degrees like the Ielts and the SAT higher your opportunity to get a scholarship or to get accepted at the university. If so, what band score should it be? Thank you for your time!
Hello! I would like to ask
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questions about the university.

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I have noticed on the
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university
website that the
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university
is going to launch an English-speaking faculty of medicine, is it going to be available in the year
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2022 - 2023
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Is there any scholarships for Moroccans who
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abroad to be more specific in the Arabian Gulf. If not, How much does it cost to
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get
into the
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university
and does it include the accommodation?

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Is taking degrees like the
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Ielts
and the SAT higher your opportunity to
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get
a scholarship or to
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get
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accepted
at the
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university
. If
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, what band score should it be?

Thank you for your time!

IELTS letter Hello! I would like to ask some questions about the university.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
116 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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