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letter to Dr. Vincent Tce

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Dr. Vincent Raymond 422 Wickham Tce 08. 08. 2012 Dear Dr. Vincent Raymond Re: Dulcie Wood (DOB: 15. 07. 1946) I would appriciate visiting Dulcie Wood as a new patient to your practice, who was diagnosed with cardiac flutter. Although treatment with Noten was initiated and its dosage was increased, she reported increase in the episodes of her heart flutter sensation. So, I decided to refer her to your practice for further assessments. Her symptoms have initiated a few months ago. At first appointment, she was taking Zocer 20 mg daily and Calcium Caltrate 1 daily. So, Noten 50 gm half of tablet daily in morning was added to her medications due to oneset of heart flutter sensation. Her blood pressure was 145/75 on that time. At the next visit, although the heart fluttering sensations decreased, she reported 2 times waking up at night due to heart flutter in the last couple of weeks. Thus, the Noten dosage was doubled by addition of half of tablet in pm to her prescription. Inspite of slight improvement, she mentioned increase of heart flutter episodes during last three days which was sensed at both day and night. Also, I detected significant increase in the patient’s blood pressure (180/90) in this visit which can be related to her anxiety. Therefore, I booked an appointment for Mrs. Wood by contacting your receptionist. I should mention the patient herself recommended you as you are her sister doctor.

Dr. Vincent Raymond

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08. 08. 2012

Dear Dr. Vincent Raymond

Re: Possible spelling mistake found.JulieDulcimerMuncieDunceDulcetDollie
Dulcie
 Wood (DOB: 15. 07. 1946)

I would Possible spelling mistake found.appreciate
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flutter
. Although treatment with Possible spelling mistake found.NotedNoteNotesNo tenNot enNote n
Noten
was initiated
 and its dosage was increased
, she reported increase in the episodes of her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharacterfeelinglovesoulnature
heart
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flutter
 sensation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I decided to refer her to your practice for further
 assessments.

Her symptoms have initiated a few months ago. At first
 appointment, she was taking Possible spelling mistake found.Zoner
Zocer
 20 mg daily and Calcium Possible spelling mistake found.Castrate
Caltrate
 1 daily. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, Possible spelling mistake found.NotedNoteNotesNo tenNot enNote n
Noten
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added
 to her medications due to Possible spelling mistake found.onsetone set
oneset
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharacterfeelinglovesoulnature
heart
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoverquiverthrobflitflickerdrift
flutter
 sensation. Her blood pressure was 145/75 on that time. At the next
 visit, although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharacterfeelinglovesoulnature
heart
 fluttering sensations decreased, she reported 2 times waking up at night due to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharacterfeelinglovesoulnature
heart
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoverquiverthrobflitflickerdrift
flutter
 in the last couple of weeks. Thus
, the Possible spelling mistake found.NotedNoteNotesNo tenNot enNote n
Noten
 dosage was doubled
 by addition of half of tablet in pm to her prescription. Possible spelling mistake found.InspireIn spite
Inspite
 of slight improvement, she mentioned increase of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharacterfeelinglovesoulnature
heart
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhoverquiverthrobflitflickerdrift
flutter
 episodes during last three days which was sensed
 at both day and night. Also
, I detected significant increase in the patient’s blood pressure (180/90) in this visit which can be related
 to her anxiety.

Therefore
, I booked an appointment for Mrs. Wood by contacting your receptionist. I should mention the patient herself recommended you as you are her sister doctor. 